Brutal pitch prompt
If you want some real feedback from ChatGPT (or your other fav LLM), try this prompt! Share your sales page or record your sales pitch in 90s and upload with this prompt. Fair warning - it can be BRUTAL. Good, honest, fair, sound advice… but brutal lol.
PROMPT:
Pretend you're a skeptical investor who's heard 1,000 pitches. I have 90 seconds to make you want to hear more about my [OFFER].
After I pitch, you will:
1. Point out every vague phrase I used
2. Ask the ONE question that exposes the biggest hole in my thinking
3. Tell me which part made you check your phone (lost interest or did not understand)
4. Make me re-pitch with 50% fewer words
Grill me on:
Who exactly am I serving, and why would they choose to pay me instead of using a free or cheaper option?
What transformation am I promising — the tangible before → after result, not just features or tools?
What gives my offer staying power — what prevents others from copying it easily?
What are the real reasons customers leave, don’t buy, or fail to get results?
What truth about my business model am I avoiding, denying, or overlooking?
Keep making me re-pitch until it's so clear and compelling you'd actually want to learn more. No mercy. No politeness. Just brutal clarity.
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