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I'm writing story for my English class based on the quote “We have to heal our wounded world. The chaos, despair, and senseless destruction we see today are a result of the alienation that people feel from each other and their environment.” – Michael Jackson. A few sentences or suggestions on how you would continue the story would be appreciated It was a Thursday morning. The sun reached through the shutter windows, tempting Shaz to look up from Lord of the flies. La di da, she couldn’t do that. The books were full of marks and she wouldn’t catch them if she didn’t read about Simon and his conch. The classroom was filled with the scent of cheap perfume and sweat. Shaz wasn’t paying attention to anything around her; wandering thoughts drowning out the monotonous voice of her teacher and the chattering of her classmates. The analog clock on the wall seemed to tick slower by the second. Ten forty five.. Ten forty six.. Only three and a half hours until she could pack up, and go home, relax, sleep and wake up to a blaring alarm and the panic to see that a few minutes had cost her a public humiliation ritual at 8 in the morning. “Shaz, your turn to read”. Twenty-four pairs of eyes on her as she came to the realisation that she might have been alone in her head but wasn’t in the room; she scrambled to open her book again. She could feel the murmur of disappointment from her teacher as she flipped through the pages with her shaking hands, feeling her face heat up with the guilt and embarrassment as the whispers and muffled snickering from her classmates grew louder and louder. Attempting to hide her red-hot face,she kept her head down and pretended to keep searching amidst the pages and pages when in reality she really had no idea where she had left off from not reading. She could feel her clammy hands melting along with her reputation. “Ummm, chapter 8…” Shaz started to talk, but her trembling voice was quickly interrupted by Mr Facetiousman. “Don’t even bother, I won’t be able to hear you anyway because you speak so quietly”
Monday 8:30pm Session Cancelled — Vote on New Times (2 Free Sessions/Week)
Quick update: I’m pausing the Monday 8:30–9:00pm session for now because that slot hasn’t been the best fit for most people. I’ll keep running at least 2 free sessions each week—I’m just shifting them to times that suit the majority. Action: Comment your top 2 preferred time slots. Reply format: - Option 1 (day + time) - Option 2 (day + time)
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A comparison between 1984 and Black Mirror
Found an old article that I wrote on 1984. It really is an amazing text! https://savemyhsc.com/common-module-nineteen-eighty-four/
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Midweek (Wednesday): Great History Book
Hey guys I watched a YouTube video today that was based on a history book that I love called Guns, Germs and Steel by Jared M. Diamond. I highly recommend reading this text! (or you could just watch the video if you're too busy with schoolwork 😆) https://shorturl.at/mIpyR
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Discursive Essay Practice
Hey, I would greatly appreciate it if you can provide some feedback on attempt at a discursive essay I was assigned for homework, thanks! Question: Should certain invasive species be completely eradicated? Essay: It was 11:27pm, on a Sunday night. I was hunched shoulder to knee looming over the disordered sprawl of loose unbound papers. The menagerie of pen nibs were lying divorced from their caps underneath the chaos. Nonsensical loops and cursive attempts lay bleak, overlapping the ruled lines in a sorry attempt to form words. Momentarily, the silence was interrupted by a persistent hum. My eyes twitched as I perceived a mosquito circling the study lamp, attracted by the warm hue. Immediately my first instinct was to swat that Vampiric speck with a resounding SMACK! Of course after the obligatory shriek of terror. It is the natural course: when a ‘non-native species’ invades your sanctuary to cause disruption, harm or simply be a nuisance; you erase the problem with extreme prejudice—to restore order. But as my palm hovered near, a sting of doubt struck. If we decide that this microscopic entity that stains our native ecosystem can simply be resolved through the destruction of its species, are we really the ones who should be deciding what lives or dies? To what extent do we stop? The idea of completely eradicating certain invasive species for the benefit of keystone organisms is no foreign concept, the discourse of yes or no isn’t either. As I researched deeper into this seemingly rudimentary question, the debate split into two conflicting stances. There are Ecological Purists, who believe we must deliver the fatal spray to restore the ecosystem to its original state and Novel Ecosystem advocates, who suggest that we have already crossed the threshold, and argue that we should rather learn to evolve & adapt with the consequences of our past, Since European settlement in the late 19th century, the spread of invasive species and the rising loss of biodiversity has been rampant. According to the National Academy of Sciences, invasive feral predators – cats, rats and foxes and others have contributed to around 60% of bird, mammal and reptile extinctions.
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