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SL: Can’t speak English fluently? Jake couldn’t either… SL: Why the hell can’t I speak properly?” (A true story) SL: The love-hate relationship is real. Quick question, (name): ever get frustrated and say, "Why the hell can’t I speak properly?” Same with my student Jake. For the last 2 months, Jake has been trying to impress his date by speaking fluent English (#goals)... But every time, He stumbled. He just couldn’t get the words out smoothly. Then he tried my new English Speaking Formula™—and everything changed. Now he says it’s truly transformative. In fact, he’s already using it in everyday conversations. If speaking feels like a challenge for you too, Then, you’re one click away from speaking like a native. Steal my English study formula for free. (link) Talk Soon, Gaby
[For Critique] A Rusty Comeback lol
SL: This is why you’re not recovering fast. PV: The real reason you're tired by set 3. Hey %FIRSTNAME%, Every drop of sweat feels rewarding, but are you giving your body what it truly needs? You finish your second set… drenched, breathing heavy, heart pounding. You grab your jug, take a long pull of cold water... and feel good. But that refreshing feeling? It’s not enough. Here’s why: Cold water only gives you temporary relief, not the recovery your body actually needs. Under the surface? Your muscles crave lost nutrients, your cells are dry, and your nerves are misfiring, leaving you sluggish and unfocused. Recovery is already falling behind, before set 3 even starts. Why? Because water has: - No sodium to keep your muscles building and firing, - No potassium to stop cramps during your workout,  - No magnesium to regulate energy and speed up recovery. Bottom line? Just cold water that doesn’t care about speedy recovery, cuz it only gets you hydrated. That’s why most gains are lost, Not from the extra effort you put in, but because your body is working against you. Now, don’t get me wrong… I’m not saying u shouldn’t drink water anymore. Water is essential for hydration, but it’s just not enough for recovery and performance. That’s why you need more than just water… like a great-tasting hydration solution, packed with electrolytes and coconut water. Backed by science and trusted by athletes, like Jones here, who recovers 3x faster and is primed to break another PR with HYDREAU! (INSERT PROOF) HYDREAU is designed to deliver optimal hydration and recovery when you need it most. One scoop only. That’s all it takes to bounce back faster, stop cramps dead, and stay fueled when your body wants to quit. Your body’s been asking for more. Don’t let your progress slip… Not because of your effort, but because of what you didn’t give. Grab your HYDREAU here. Peace out, Xplosiv
I need Help Finding an Offer!
I’ve just been reading the first lessons on picking an offer, and I was just wondering, is it possible to offer yourself as the product in the form of services? I have a huge amount of experience, writing, different forms of copy, from sales pages, to articles. I’ve owned my own niche websites, which grew to over 150,000 visitors a month, and earn over 10k per month with a 14% click through rate to Amazon affiliates. I’ve also helped a game company get over 4 million app downloads for their games by writing content and ad copy. I also, increased WebtrafficGeeks from 3k a month to 20k a month. In 12 months, by rewriting the landing page, A/B testing ex. And that’s just a bit of the experience I have. I’ve gained work through Upwork in the past, but it’s joke of a website now. And I’d prefer to activity instead of passively get leads by reaching out to them. But I’m not too sure what service I could offer. Or, for the duration of this course, is it better to just pick an existing high performing affiliate product, such as on Gumroad, that I can just keep pushing? Thank you all for your help.
Finally, something I enjoy writing. Thank you Jonny
SL: Why Duran’s Boxing is Pure Evil PV: An omniscient technique that completes a fighter Slick and tricky, just like Leonard. But when Duran loses his temper, his technique became something else. So what made his ruthless, almost sinister style one of the most dangerous in history? Today, %FIRSTNAME%, I’ll show you how it turned Duran into one of the greatest of all time - and how you can use it too. It wasn’t his stance. It wasn’t just his aggressive brawling. It wasn’t even his slick technique that earned him a seat among the Four Kings. It was something deeper. Something eerily similar to Shakur Stevenson’s secret weapon in mastering defense. And what is it? Duran’s Devil Eyes. Those dark, piercing eyes that sent shivers down his opponents’ spines. Omniscient. Calculated. Relentless. That’s why, at his peak, controlling distance was second nature to him. His lead hand? A measuring stick, dictating every inch of space between him and his prey. He knew exactly where he stood, making his opponents' punches slice through empty air, Leaving them defenseless - ready to be torn apart. And once that opening appeared? - Body counters, - Inside fighting, - Systematic breakdown. Because his goal wasn’t just to hurt his opponent. It was to dismantle them. So, do you want the power of the all-seeing Devil’s Eye in the ring? Click here to watch as I break down how Duran mastered distance - while unleashing pure brutality. Happy training, Skillr
Jonny please take a look at this
context: This is a cold email for a coating company that also offers RFI/EMI shielding to the defense, aerospace, and medical industries. Subject line: Name, how reliable is your coating partner? Name, Are you 100% confident about the coating and EMI/RFI shielding services you’re currently getting from your supplier? If you didn’t answer a resounding yes, then you need to read this. You see, poor coating can cause severe damage to your business. Such as fines from the FDA, product recalls, loss of trust, and increased scrutiny from customers, etc. To avoid that, you need to work with a partner offering high-end coating and EMI/RFI shielding services capable of withstanding extreme environments without compromising performance. My company, Rare Earth Coatings, offers certified coatings for businesses like yours. Ensuring that your products meet rigorous quality and compliance standards of the FDA. We’ve worked for top government defense agencies and medical facilities. Sadly, we can’t name them because of the NDA we signed. To make up for that, I’d be willing to send you some free test samples so you can verify our quality. Worth a 10-minute chat?
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