Critique my cold email copy! · Brendan's AI Community

Critique my cold email copy!

Hey|Hi|Hello [First Name],

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Most HVAC businesses we talk to get plenty of leads, but struggle with slow follow-up and no-shows.

That’s why we built a 24/7 AI receptionist that answers every call, responds instantly, and books appointments on the spot — so you never miss another lead.

If your booked appointment rate doesn’t improve by at least 15% in the first 14 days, you don’t pay. It’s fully done-for-you, no extra work on your end.

Would you like me to send over a quick 2-minute video showing how it works?

– Jay

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