Same product. Same price. 5x more conversions.
Before: "An automation tool for businesses"
After: "Save 15 hours/week on lead qualification. Built for B2B sales teams."
The formula:
1. WHO is this for? (Specific audience)
2. WHAT do they get? (Specific outcome)
3. HOW is this different? (Specific angle)
Conversion: 0.8% → 6.2%
Same traffic. Same product. Better words.
How would you describe your product in one sentence?