A few days ago I shared the first version of this website promo video and got some really helpful feedback from people here. I went back, improved the pacing, transitions, text timing, and cleaned up a few sections instead of starting over.
This version feels much closer to what I had in mind. A couple of clients have already seen it and asked if I could create similar promo videos for their websites, which was a nice surprise.
Website:
I'm still treating this as a learning project, so I'd love another round of honest feedback.
If you watched both versions, what improved the most?
And if you only saw this one, what's the first thing you'd change for the next version?