This training discusses how to put a story within a story and keep it part of the original story. I told a joke at the end. Let me know if you thought it was funny?

In this session I talk about timing of the story. I was trying to be brief and couldn't bring to mind some of the words I was trying to say but here is one of them: flashback. So use flashbacks, foreshadowing, and rearranging timeline to show glimpses of something happening in the vague background before revealing the full story. Or reveal details about the story in different parts of the book using these techniques. The book I mentioned that I am reading has a very good example of this that you should be able to see in chapter one of the "Read Sample" on the Amazon listing and is called "Capuche" by Hotse Langeraar

I'm calling this one Tuning in to Exciting Writing.

As im getting ready for work.. Iv been thinking of how I should go ahead an making my next chapter for my next book im doing up. Its book 2 of sweet magic bakery Trying to figure out what to type and say.. lets just say im having abit of writers block.. If any of you have any advice on how to think of way, please let me know

Please be aware there is a 15 second glitch that will cause the recording to seem to freeze.