I keep changing the hair. I also adjusted the lines on her shirt. How does it look so far?

Whenever I am live on social I probably answer these questions a thousand times 😂 "what brush I am using?" "what ink I am using?" "what paper am I inking on?" So I finally put together a nice big long Amazon list of all the different materials that I use and personally prefer for my work for anyone who wants recommendations OR is looking to test out new materials! Check it out here: https://amzn.to/3MAvazi Also please share your favorite pens, pencils, inks, watercolors, paper, markers, paint, canvases, etc. below! I personally am always interesting in trying out new pens despite the fact that I already have 5000+ pens cluttering my studio 🫣

Okay, so I redid the hair... I don't hate it, but it still feels like a lazy result.

Are the spots too much? I feel like they're distracting.

This is what I have so far. The hair and shirt are making me sad. I've watched so many tutorials and I just can't seem to replicate the process. @N. Colin Dyer , I saw your comment about the tail after I had already started coloring.