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15d •
"Exile" Updated Treatment
Hey all here is an updated link to the treatment doc for my "Exile" story. Please feel free to leave comments/questions. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hL0XrBU4D2N0dWwlr0z0_3kRv94Er1V_n2Lp5gDVPMQ/edit?usp=sharing
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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I do think that would be a good inciting incident and want to make it clearer that things tie back to it.
Nov 6 •
EXILE - Dream Sequence scene
Hey all, I've got a scene that's part of act one and the intent is to start to give Eve a sense of impending doom that something is coming for her and something is about to happen. (The Originator character I mentioned in class). What I'd like feedback on: - Does it make enough sense while still leaving some intrigue? - Is it clear on the three different characters? (Originator, Enforcer, and Observer) - Is it too short? - Other edits/grammar errors? Things to cut down? Other context: - Cleo is Eve's cat. - Asper is Eve's best friend
Nov 3 •
Is everyone still planning on Wed the 5th at 6pm?
Let me know so I can get an idea of who will attend the Q&A!
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@Nathan S Jones is there a link zoom link?
0 likes • Nov 6
Ah yep, I see it.
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