@Maxwell Obuma your email was great bro but here's something that I think you can improve 1.your email was too long try to cut down some unnecessary stuffs 2.highlight important stuffs which will catch readers attention 3.you can add some humour to make it more interesting 4.try to make it persuative Overall your email was great Keep doing the hardwork

@Shobha Kumari no worries Feel free to ask me anything ( i can help i will )

@Daniel Huertas your copy was good but you can make it better by cutting some unnecessary stuffs Good work 👍

@Abd Alrahman not everyone can read long paragraphs so ... I hope you understand

@Soumi Pal don't thank me just review my new copy I need reviews

@Soumi Pal you can check my profile or i can dm you (let me dm you my yesterday copies )

@Furqan Ali yours copy was great but you wrote it in long paragraphs don't write like this give some space after writing 2 3 lines and try to make it concise Anyways good going keep working hard you got this

@Furqan Ali let's do it