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0 likes โ€ข Mar '25
here something fresh https://docs.google.com/document/d/1czGPGgFnFzV15np9stVgxNYfjniNXQWcN40UesszQWc/edit?usp=sharing
๐‚๐จ๐จ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐  ๐˜๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐‚๐จ๐ฉ๐˜†๐˜€ ๐Ÿ”ฅ{๐Ÿ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ ๐‘๐„๐•๐ˆ๐„๐–๐’ }
๐ƒ๐‘๐Ž๐ ๐€๐’ ๐Œ๐€๐๐˜ ๐€๐’ ๐๐Ž๐’๐’๐ˆ๐๐‹๐„ ๐ˆ๐Œ ๐†๐Ž๐ˆ๐๐† ๐๐”๐“๐’ ๐–๐ˆ๐“๐‡ ๐“๐‡๐ˆ๐’ ๐‘๐„๐•๐ˆ๐„๐–๐’ ๐„๐€๐‚๐‡ ๐‘๐„๐•๐ˆ๐„๐– ๐–๐ˆ๐‹๐‹ ๐๐„ ๐’๐๐„๐‚๐ˆ๐…๐ˆ๐‚ ๐€๐๐ƒ ๐ˆ๐… ๐˜๐Ž๐” ๐†๐„๐“ ๐Ž๐…๐…๐„๐๐ƒ๐„๐ƒ ! ๐˜๐Ž๐” ๐–๐ˆ๐‹๐‹ ๐๐„ ๐’๐”๐„๐ƒ ๐๐Ž๐“ ๐Ž๐๐‹๐˜ ๐๐˜ ๐Œ๐„ ! ๐๐”๐“ ๐–๐ˆ๐“๐‡ ๐–๐‡๐Ž๐‹๐„ ๐†๐‘๐Ž๐”๐ ๐€๐๐ƒ ๐“๐‡๐„๐‘๐„ ๐’๐‡๐Ž๐”๐‹๐ƒ ๐๐„ ๐€ ๐‹๐ˆ๐Š๐„ ๐Ž๐ ๐๐Ž๐’๐“ ๐€๐๐ƒ ๐“๐‡๐„ ๐‘๐„๐๐‹๐˜ ๐ˆ ๐–๐ˆ๐‹๐‹ ๐’๐„๐๐ƒ ๐˜๐Ž๐” ๐€๐’ ๐‘๐„๐•๐ˆ๐„๐– ๐Š๐„๐„๐ ๐“๐‡๐€๐“ ๐ˆ๐ ๐Œ๐ˆ๐๐ƒ "๐•ฏ๐–”๐–“'๐–™ ๐–˜๐–™๐–”๐–• ๐–œ๐–๐–Š๐–“ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š'๐–—๐–Š ๐–™๐–Ž๐–—๐–Š๐–‰. ๐•พ๐–™๐–”๐–• ๐–œ๐–๐–Š๐–“ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š'๐–—๐–Š ๐–‰๐–”๐–“๐–Š." -GOGGINS
๐‚๐จ๐จ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐  ๐˜๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐‚๐จ๐ฉ๐˜†๐˜€ ๐Ÿ”ฅ{๐Ÿ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ ๐‘๐„๐•๐ˆ๐„๐–๐’ }
0 likes โ€ข Mar '25
tell me what you think https://docs.google.com/document/d/1czGPGgFnFzV15np9stVgxNYfjniNXQWcN40UesszQWc/edit?usp=sharing
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
0 likes โ€ข Mar '25
here is some of my writing https://docs.google.com/document/d/1czGPGgFnFzV15np9stVgxNYfjniNXQWcN40UesszQWc/edit?usp=sharing
Drop your copies & Leave a like.
Check out my first welcome email. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wMKxUx3u7prFd1JA2NVwz4U-RCprz9d_pCOq9BHdpFI/edit?usp=sharing
2 likes โ€ข Mar '25
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1czGPGgFnFzV15np9stVgxNYfjniNXQWcN40UesszQWc/edit?usp=sharing
Plz review my copy
And give a full breakdown so I can improver faster https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V7SxK_ZRCquO8B7Ilf4z_7Sd8JH4ozabeMueStYE-5o/edit?usp=drivesdk Also rate it out of 10 I would really appreciate it
0 likes โ€ข Feb '25
hey bro i reviewed your copy and left some notes on the doc, it is not bad for your first copy but should have been run through chatgpt for grammar, you do not want to be speaking in the present tense when you talking about the past. there are a few places where you have repeated yourself when you didn't need to. The overall message is great and it had a good rhythm, the structure was good to and you were concise for the most part. 7/10
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