@Tina Zgonc Copy is not bad, short and to the point, Make sure you just double check spacing and make the beginning more attention grabbing 7/10 Keep up the great work! https://www.instagram.com/shawn.does.copy/ - Follow me on Instagram if you don't already 🔥
@Sakthi Vel You did a pretty decent job! Just make sure you do a little more story telling. It reads nice but it feels like it transitions too quickly at parts 8/10 Keep up the great work! https://www.instagram.com/shawn.does.copy/ - Follow me on Instagram if you don't already 🔥
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@Pietari Koivula Great Copy! It's spaced out, to the point, not to long. The advice that I would give is to add more story into the middle of the copy where I left notes Expose the pain of how it feels for the potential client reading it. no one cares what you know until they know how much you care! they copy is great for what is here, however because I feel like its an incomplete story I would also say that this email in the state that its in wouldn't convert The copy structure is (8/10) But the actual email is (3/10) because it wouldn't convert Add more story with the same structure and you will be solid, hope this helps!!!!
I have been outreaching for 7 months now,this is my 8th month outreaching to clients,most of them left me on seen,I tried complimenting them about their business,I tried sending memes,guys I need help here, ASAP
@Karabo Ntsiu The Instagram is not good, not only is it just selfies but there is no captions. It truly looks like a fake profile and there is no story behind your profile. Treat your Instagram not only like your resume but like a piece of art. Look at people like @Tyson FourDee Instagram for Picture or even video inspiration. ALSO look at the profiles of the people you are reaching out to! Tyson isn't posting just to post or to look cool, He's doing every piece of content with INTENTION. That's why his content is good.
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@Musa Bashir wrote feedback, copy is good but it needs to be put in order, the subject line story should be at the top, not in the middle. Hope my feedback helps and don't forget to leave a like 🔥💪