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This is my First VSL script. Please review it🙆‍♀️Thanks in advance for your support🙆‍♀️
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ogVfIL-UG6sJGbbFUuoM0v_6_VXNGnpssQaArHi9IkU/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes • Jun '24
I have never written vsl, so I am pointing out the lines which I felt confusing and boring. 1. Hook is relatable but I felt there are questions in same pattern. 2. The transition to empathy thing, I find it little boring, just make it little relevant. 3. I find a lot of lines confusing in grand offer, make it simpler and clearer to reader what they will get by doing what you want. These are my opinions, Change the above things if others also find it relatable, if not you don't have to cause there won't be a problem as majority readers don't have problem with that.
0 likes • Jun '24
@Selina Huỳnh Huỳnh you are welcome, can I know what time duration for vsl did you wrote.
Nobody reviewing:(
Pls review my first copy https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t-UMMPT1UlncKDfO4Q_CBs1uOgZU5sT88thvRUSDMso/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes • May '24
Also can you change the settings to suggestion mode so I can leave comments in it.
0 likes • May '24
@Akshay Kannan I just left some comments check that out.
No one is reviewing my copy 😕
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DR1JC_q7DP-OG2OY37SHgERKOxZFJFx-/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=107954174830138849526&rtpof=true&sd=true
0 likes • May '24
It's well-written and engaging, likely to resonate with recipients who may be seeking ways to improve their mental health and overall well-being.
Even If you are Lazy
Please review this and tell me how can I improve this email. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gRDGWYQyNQUmRr6uAEsG2os1zznGzHdT5q_lGAwgVE8/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • May '24
@Mary Muchai the email is direct and we'll written, I liked the opening of the problem and being relatable with the reader. It is good, you can make it more better.
0 likes • May '24
@Abdul muswair Shaikh Hey I liked the copy after edited, in first one you used same words many times, it makes less interesting. Subject is short and good but I think you can make it more interesting.
Pls guys review my Real Estate copy :
HOW TO SELL YOUR REAL E$TATE X2 of IT'S ORIGINAL PRICE Hello Tim. You meant be wondering how does person like Gaint C. sell his properties x2 of it's price ? come on, from personal analogy, those properties are not even worth half of the original price Yet they sell. Then what is Gaint C. doing that you don't know about ? 🤔 well my friend, I'm about to unvail his "billionaire secret" to you Is what they call the MAB system… Marketing and Branding. I just heard you say “how does this work ?” Again my friend, effective marking, high-quality visuals, and a strong brand identity always creat an emotional connection with buyers, justifying a higher price. By Investing in a professional marketing and branding, you can : • Creat an emotional connection with potential buyers • stand out from the competition and establish a premium image • increase your home's perceived value • Justify a higher asking price • sell your property for up to ×2 of it's original price. Boom 💥 Now I ask you Tim. Do you still want to settle for a mediocre sale ? I guess the answer is CAPITAL NO ! Elevate your home's potential with desygner expert marketing and branding We have a special focus on real estate marking, providing solutions for real estate agents and brokers to creat professional marketing materials that skyrocket 🚀 home prices. Want to know more of our service contact us right now ! tap the link below to get access to our website : https://desygner.com/MAB/ See you soon.
0 likes • May '24
It was nicely done bro, I think the subject line should be shorter. The body of the email was good. Tho I am not in real estate industry I was hooked.
0 likes • May '24
@Raphael Goodfriday Ok
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