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1 like • Jan 26
@Vedha Reddy Your copy is too straightforward. There's 2 feet space around the Iphone when it is kept in display which makes it feel more valuable. The same way, when you build intrigue before actually offering the value, you make the value feel even more valuable.
0 likes • Jan 27
@Aryan Singh The first one's better, but still A LOTT OF progress to make. I even re-wrote the 2nd email. Check it out.
DROP SOME OG COPY
LIKE IT THEN I WILL CHECK IT
DROP SOME OG COPY
0 likes • Jan 10
4th email for a welcome sequence. Kindly review and rate out of 10. https://docs.google.com/document/d/19aFTdyTRT66CrxsMa4P7l5WnvAvLKdpoo4FFF2gjg6I/edit?usp=sharing
1 like • Jan 25
@Ibrahim Ahmed Nice one.
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
1 like • Jan 17
The 5th copy of my welcome sequence. Kindly rate it out of 10. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sFHzpF6P9a_JVVbapIN0V7QMVau7oZKBu1DRTZQ0wRE/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes • Jan 25
@Jan Bechy Nice.
This might be the best email ever LOL
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xXAXU_1WOr4cNWZ1LkyfcNfPdfZzuJ7Tk5scpbulEKg/edit?usp=sharing if not, be brutally honest
0 likes • Jan 25
Nice email. However, walking 10k steps a day isn't a simple job. Be realistic bro. Either the friction of the technique should be less or the results should be more, but the friction is more and the results are less.
Where are you from?
I am sure most of you have not adjusted your location on the 4D copywriting Map So tell me Where are you from/where do you live? I am Congolese but I live in Namibia, Windhoek
1 like • Jan 22
Pakistan bro
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Rayyan Bin Raheel
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@rayyan-bin-raheel-1592
13 y/o. Average Copywriter. I'm sure I'll be successful one day.

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Joined Jul 4, 2024
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