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Manuscript assessment?
I've attached my best rejection to date, which I received this morning. I guess that means that my queries are getting closer to hitting the mark. I've already repositioned it as YA rather than MG, but I feel like I maybe need a manuscript assessment by a professional editor. Ideally, this would be someone who works as an agent as well and knows the market. There are plenty of American agents doing both jobs, but can anyone recommend a UK person for it, please?
Manuscript assessment?
Agent query/pitch advice
Hi all! I was lucky enough to attend an Agent led event last night, discussing queries, pitches and the editing process. Here's a couple of (hopefully helpful) things that came out of the discussion: 1. Make your query letters as short and professional as you can. You might want to fill it with loads of lovely detail, but they find it refreshing and attractive when one is brief. 2. Lead with your "comp" books. Don't start by getting into the plot or characters, show that you know the market and have an idea of where your book sits by comparing it to successful, well regarded (recent if you can) books in that area. Then tease the plot in two or three sentences, then end on a question or note of suspense. 3. Don't bother trying to "hide" your genre. People are tempted to claim a different genre because they're worried their novel isn't currently marketable. The agent will know immediately when they start reading the sub, so why bother hiding it? 4. (In the UK) Avoid querying in March or October. The London and Frankfurt book fairs pull a lot of agents away from reading at those times. 5. Agents give EVERYTHING a read... But bear in mind they have existing clients and an inbox of up to 20 subs a day. They also then let some of us pitch to them and get live feedback (which was heartening and super useful), so do keep an eye out for similar events. Even if it's not stated, there might be a similar learning opportunity offered.
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Thanks, James. I've done 2 or 3 of those and a Pitching Your Novel day course and the ones I've been to have all said lead with the story data and plot, but comps were left for later.
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@Gabby Martini thank you. I've noticed Americans seem to prefer a longer pitch in the letter too.
Competition Results & Feedback
A few people have asked about when feedback and competition results will be available. Feedback will issued piecemeal in February and March - it's just a matter of chance if you get yours at the start or end of that period. Winners will be announces in early April. Good luck all!
2 likes • 28d
@Elena Zargani only every half an hour? 🤣
Prize Now Closed.
Congratulations to all those who entered the prize. We had over 533 entries, which is significantly more than last year (which was our first). Judging & feedback will proceed in line with the schedule on our website.
1 like • Jan 25
@Chuck Stromme no, although the one suggestion they made was helpful. By then I'd written better short stories and started a novel, so I took in the feedback but put the story to bed.
1 like • 29d
@Lorna Riley I paid for feedback because it's so difficult to get any idea of how good something is when I'm so close to it. I'm sitting on my hands now, waiting for it! 😃
Getting it Done
What’s the one thing stopping you from finishing your current WIP right now? Procrastination? Perfectionism? That endless research rabbit hole? We are have something - share yours below.
3 likes • Jan 25
I think I've leapt too far into the plot, so I need to go back and rejig.
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Petra Glover
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@petra-glover-5300
Former teacher, retired on health grounds in 2024. I write middle-grade stories of all sorts.

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Joined Dec 12, 2025
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