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A group for writers to find feedback, tips, inspiration and to connect with other writers. Affiliated with the Marlowe and Christie writing prizes.

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Commended Entries: First Announcement
Many, many entries this cycle, well beyond what we had anticipated, and the standard of the writing has made winnowing the longlist unusually difficult. Thank you to everyone who trusted us with their opening pages. The quality was so high that the commended list is longer than in previous cycles. We are releasing the names in no particular order, over the coming days, and a shortlist will be drawn from this group. Today, in no particular order, we are announcing: - Lies on Sale by Gabby Martini - The Impossibility of Eden by Harry Wilson - Beach Dog by Tom McDonough - The Breaking Point by Fiona Harriet - The Taste of Iron by Ramona Slusarczyk - Askar and the Witch by Nina van der Beek - The City of a Thousand Eyes by Angelique Talbot - The Melusine Murders by Jesse Weiner Congratulations to all of them. Many further entries, equally commended, will be announced over the coming days. If your name is not yet here, please don't read into its absence. Names are being released in the order we can write the posts, which has nothing to do with preference, and every remaining commendation carries the same weight as those above.
Commended Entries
The first part of the list will be published here tomorrow!
Discuss your Feedback
Hello! All Gold package customers should now have their feedback (let me know if you do not at info@marloweandchristie.com). This is a thread for discussion of your feedback, and to ask me any questions about it. Have fun! Edit: Others who have received Silver or Exclusive feedback also very welcome!
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@Jane D Coming soon!
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@Ben Bradley Hi, thanks for getting in touch and glad the feedback was useful. You have two options. Pressing on means highlighting the distance between Jack's fantasy and reality. Maybe Chloe says something that directly contradicts the woman he invented. Or maybe Jack registers the gap between what he imagined and what's actually sitting across the table. The alternative, cutting back, is simpler. Trim the fantasy material so the reader spends less time inside Jack's head before meeting the real woman. The cafe scene is where the extract really shines, so there's an argument for getting their further. If Jack's tendency to build people up in his head before he knows them is going to matter later, lean into it. If not, don't. Hope that helps, and best of luck with it!
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@Cressida Evans I’ve got rid of Ruth Ware, but are there others? What is there purpose?
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Issy McCann. Marlowe and Christie Prize Judge Team Leader. Favours silk pyjamas for writing. Also goes by Isabel.

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