@Ben Fn I reviewed your email and I think you need to improve your explanation style because the thing you are trying to tell will be understood by the opposite one so, always have this in mind while writing your copy and importantly use Grammarly to improve your grammar. And don't leave more space in the email because it won't suit the TikTok brain. And I like your email concept. I rate your copy for 5/10.
@User User I reviewed your copy, it is a good email and I think this is a testimonial email. Try to bold the font that gives benefits from your product and I like the way you explained what you gonna tell in that email. I rate your email by 8/10.
You can also send yours, just please include context. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KoJywP6ynjUg_spqzEzz8kQMLkH6BuRU8rKRjrH9FB8/edit?usp=drivesdk
I reviewed your copy, and it was not more clear, so try to improve it. And I add some comments to your copy, so check it out. I'll rate your copy for 5/10.
@Qawiem A'ufy Your copy is good and there are a few grammatical mistakes there you'll correct them with the help of grammarly. I'll rate your copy for 8/10. Good job π