Hi Everyone, this is an email copy I wrote for a coach who helps 9-5ers build income online: https://docs.google.com/document/d/18YifUjfITSYCNyd21X7L2clS7aIVzWY7fZxRRoyHnAQ/edit?usp=sharing. I'll love some good and harsh feedback, and would also love to review some copy. If you'll love a second pair of eyes, drop your best email copy below 👇

Hey everyone 👋 I’m building something I deeply believe in, a brand created to help entrepreneurs sell with peace, purpose, and clarity. And I’m looking for a copywriting partner to build it with me. Someone who knows how to persuade and tell belief-shifting stories, who understands the psychology behind why people buy, and who believes in integrity. You’ll handle the copy and strategy side, crafting the messaging, the emails etc. I’ll handle the marketing and client aspect, outreach, closing, and visibility. I'll still help alongside in writing copy too, but am not fully good, so am willing to learn as we both grow. It’s a performance-based partnership, no retainers, no upfront payments. We win together by the results we create for clients. If you’re a pro copywriter who’s tired of writing copy for short-term wins, and you’d rather build something long-term. Then this might be a sign. We’re a faith-driven brand, so if excellence, clarity, and integrity matter to you, you’ll feel right at home. Whether you prefer to stay behind the scenes or grow into a visible voice, there’s space for both. I’m not looking for someone to “help me with projects.”I’m looking for someone to build with me long-term. If this feels aligned, comment “interested” or DM me and I’ll share more about the vision privately. Thank you all 🫡❤️

I remember joining this group after watching the 8hours course from Tyson. I would do cold dm’s, cold calls, cold emails. Got rejected time and again, but I refused to give in. I then decided to stick to one outreach method, and go all in. The truth is, there is no best outreach method. Find the one that works for you and stay there. Trust God, learn from the best @Tyson FourDee . And you’ll start seeing results. I know this isn’t much, but after 7 months of no results, and £0 in my account. By Gods grace I have hit my first £1,000. Now, £10k is the goal 🙌, thanks @Tyson FourDee for giving so much value online. You’re indeed the real GOAT

I have a client I have been working with for some time now, and I write emails for her. She was sending emails from Stan to her audience. But because of better customization, we moved to systeme.io. She used to use systeme.io in the past, but she stopped sending from there in a long while. So, as we were moving back to Systeme, I told her to warm up her domain for better deliverability, but she didn't. So we started sending some engagement emails to her list. I noticed the opened rates were not that high, and all of a sudden, they dropped to less than 4%. Now we have started domain warmup and have sent engagement and value emails for about a week now, but still, there have been no improvements. What do I do, could anyone give me real advice that has helped you 😔

Hey Everyone, Just wrote an email copy for a course seller, would love your most brutal honest review. Zero fluff. I really appreciate you all, Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/150xfm-fDocvNQxHxtI5kwQy5MRKB62ApjMYSx6m_0SU/edit?usp=sharing