I thought it would be FUN to kick off an About Page Feedback Thread so we can support each other and level up our copy together. I’ve already noticed how thoughtful and helpful so many of you are with feedback (seriously… some of you could be copy coaches. Looking at you @Matthew O'Brien 😄). Your About page is often the very first impression someone has of your community or offer. Fresh eyes can spot blind spots we can’t see ourselves. Here’s how it works: 👇 Drop your About page link below 💬 Give feedback on at least one other person’s page in this thread When giving feedback, consider: • Can you tell who it’s for right away? • Is there a clear transformation or outcome? • Is authority or credibility established? • What’s included — and are the benefits clear? • Is there a reason to join now? • Is there a clear call to action? P.S. Thank you for your grace and kindness while I’ve been sick. I appreciate you so much!

Filmed a quick vid for you as I’m sipping my coffee this morning.

I know we have a mix of Skoolers who've been here for alllll different periods of time. I only started THIS Skool Community 14 days ago, but I started my other community (fully paid) in June last year.

👉 CLOSED FOR NEW SUBMISSIONS. (READ THE PINNED COMMENT!) Drop your link below and I’ll record a short, honest Loom vid on how to improve it. A few brief notes (so we're on the same page!): - This will be high-level + strategic (not a full rewrite) - I’ll focus on 1–2 things that will move the needle MOST - I’ll film as many as I can and may cap it once I hit my limit or lose my voice (whichever comes first, LOL) 😅 I don’t usually do this publicly… but let’s call it a one-off community experiment. 😜 If you're wondering... ..."Is my About page ACTUALLY clear?" ..."Would a random visitor 'get' what my community's about in 5 seconds?" ..."Does it even sound like ME??" Let’s find out. 😉 Alright... who's brave & wants to go first?? 👀🔥 Am I crazy for doing this? Probably. Let's freakin' go! P.S. if you have NOT written your page yet or need to improve it first, start with this about page template & training

I created Skool Copy Hub for Skool creators, coaches, and online creators who want to write clear, effective marketing copy—without starting from scratch every time ('cause that sucks!!) This is designed as a practical copy resource hub filled templates and prompts help you create copy faster and... ultimately, explain what you do and connect with YOUR people! If you’ve ever wished your copy made someone think “oooooh YES, this is for me!!” — you’re in the right place. 👇 YOUR NEXT STEPS: 1. Comment + tell us what your offer is and who it's for (feel free to drop a link!) 2. Check out the FREE Ultimate Skool About Page Template to clarify your About page 3. Explore ALL of our copy templates in the classroom 4. Optional: Want access to ALL templates from the classroom + future workshops? Upgrade your plan here. RULES: Because this is my house and YES, there are a few rules to keep this a beautiful, SAFE space for everyone. - No AI slop. You can use AI to HELP you write stuff. I use AI all the time! That's fine. BUT please make sure it makes SENSE. If it is just clear copy-and-paste AI comments or posts that don't make sense or even have YOU in it, then it'll be removed. We like to have REAL conversations here :) - No pitching to other members in the DMs. You are WELCOME to share about your offers on posts where I invite you to OR if it comes up in conversation in a comment thread, and feels natural and helpful. But if it's just a random hard pitch, it'll be removed. That's not kind or helpful to anyone. Thank you for respecting these rules. They keep this a nice place for everyone to hang out. I'm SOOO glad you're here. 🙌