This is the first landing page i made, so plz tell me the mistakes and ill try to make it better.https://nivedtcopy007.systeme.io/how-to-get-your-dream-body

even though I haven't got any pay.... It still gives me the confidence to keep moving forward

I started my copywriting journey 2 weeks ago, having a lot of doubts,tensed just having faith in God. And Finally yesterday, I achieved first milestone. I got my first client paying me 1500$ for his emails. WE ALL CAN DO THIS.WE ALL can GIVE OUR PARENTS happiness THEY DESERVE. JUST KEEP GOING 💪. HARD WORK ALWAYS PAYS OFF🔥🔥

Guys you won't believe this... so when we got on a sales call , we were discussing about their course and stuff....and it turns out she is currently working with another agency (she already paid them more that 1000 bucks for email marketing 2 months ago) and they still haven't started sending emails. And when the client told the agency owner that she was gonna take legal action, then only she tried to write something... and i saw the sample email -- it was a complete garbage 🤮. Even a complete beginner after watching Tyson's-(G) videos can make a better copy than this.. I'm not even sure if I should tell you guys their agency's name.... And this is for every aspiring copywriters who wants to change their life and make their parents proud... My father always tells me that "The Money That You Make By Scamming Someone Is Only Gonna Bring About Your downfall."

Drop your copy in the comments gentlemen. I'll try my best to re-write your copy in less than 3 days Also, Give this "COMMENT A LIKE" so everyone can see this post. And this is a great method to enhance your copywriting skill. So folks let's do this...