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4 contributions to Marlowe and Christie Writers
Call for First Lines!
Post the first line of your work in progress for feedback here!
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Before I begin, I need you to know I have never starved him.
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I want to think diversity & representation focus like Open Waters by Caleb Azumah Nelson, which I found in Waterstones this summer and fell in love with, but someone I know in publishing told me that moment has now passed, so I don't know. :/ Think there's a popular subgenre - weird girl lit - which I'm totally for!
One Sentence Summaries
One of the hardest tasks, I know. Leave a one sentence summary of one of your pieces here for constructive feedback. And contribute your own assessments of the work of others.
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@Jonathan Mark Bayliss Those last few words! V. high stakes!
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@Jane D Ooh I like this - feel like it's hinting at being UpLit - which I'm really into atm! I agree with Issy about identifying and amplifying the tension.
Welcome and First Paragraph Feedback
Hello Marlowe and Christie Writers! It's amazing to have you here. Please share the opening paragraph of your WIP to receive feedback here.
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@Yvonne McMillan Clear stakes and clear tension! Agree about the adjectives, especially opening few sentences - could strip out a couple without losing the claustrophobic feel
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@Louis Urbanowski Already like the voice and humour of the first few lines. Slightly distracted by the verb 'fondled' - not sure why!
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Nazmin Rahman
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13points to level up
@nazmin-rahman-3132
Beginner to smiling and writing. Just been long-listed for the Caledonia Novel Award! Recent MA Creative Writing & Contemporary Studies grad

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