Can someone please review my copy email
I am quite new to copywriting, and this is one of my first emails. its promoting a solar-powered phone charger just for practice: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tAoRoHrUxkVqkmCpvE2hbNHFoQ7NGCBeNgoUyDLTUKc/edit?usp=sharing (be brutally honest, so i can learn)