Can you review this? would greatly appreciate your feedback and advice https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JlKDZX73Ve87sPwoDrsyVsyYEN1VYYfqOQKYECUwITg/edit?usp=sharing

So I launched an offer 1 week ago. Today we hit 97 members in Playbooks. And the people in there are LOVING it. I'm just thinking how fricken cool would it be if we hit 100 in the next couple hours? That's just 3 more peeps.... 5pm will be exactly 1 week since launch. Who wants to be 1 of the 3 people to get us to 100? See you inside? https://skool.com/playbooks (even if you just wanna funnel hack me, this funnel has printed money on autopilot faster than any other, and if you're 1 of the next few people to join, you'll get to see why in my Tiers Implementation call)

Hey guys! Here is something i wrote as a welcome email, can you share how i can improve it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Cs7m2bUBJv3da1u_b3OVd-ieYa9zl13v6EsZvIOsESg/edit?usp=sharing Feel free to add comments, i shared access... hopefully it works. All suggestions are appreciated.

This post might be too late… But if you’re a freelance copywriter, trying to crack consistent $10k months... This could be the thing that finally gets you over the hump. The thing is… If you're listening to the operators online, you're probably being sold the line of cold outreach. It's not that it doesn't work, it's just that it creates a totally different result. Tons of emails, rejection, and low paying clients. Warm outreach? That gets you a valuable network, high paying clients, and inbound leads (people asking YOU if they can work with you). Most of you don’t have a copywriting problem...You've got a client acquisition problem. Maybe you write well and even landed a few retainers. I'm willing to bet you're better than I was when I first started. (After landing a client, I have a google search "What is copywriting exactly?") LOL But you’re still not at the point you SHOULD be. I can say that confidently, because even though I was a total beginner, I hit 10k my 2nd month in. And I never did cold outreach. I didn't know how (thank goodness). Anyways, I got on a sales call the other day, thinking it was another DFY client, and it was a freelancer. I haven't done freelance coaching in almost a year. But I could tell this kid was hungry, so I decided to help him. He just signed a client 5 days later. So I decided to do a 6-week cohort. On the first day, two of those spots were filled. The cohort officially launches this Monday, and we've already had sales booked and client's moving forward. We build your offer. Set up your funnel. Give you the systems that got me to 400k on skool. Now here’s the part where this post might actually be too late… Like I said, there's only 5 spots for a hands-on 6-week cohort. And I've got 4 calls booked tomorrow. So book a call for sooner rather than later and hopefully you'll be one of the next people in this community to blow past 10k months, like Peter my first student did.

In 18 hours, I'll be live...🫣 Showing you how I've helped not 1, but 10 Skool games winners fix their offer. So they started "selling" something people were begging for. (which makes it feel like you're not even selling....because you're actually solving people's problems and they're incredibly grateful your offer exists) And yeahhhh I'll give you my step-by-step framework, thought process, and funnel, to grow your offer and land your next 10 clients. Because it's not hard....and it's NOT complicated. The line "It's not easy, but it's incredibly simple," is BS. People say that when they want you to buy some $10k program where they overcomplicate the heck out of business. If I.... Some college dropout.... Unemployed.... 22 year old... (living off my mom's couch) Could figure it out? You freaking can too. And all it takes? 60 mins. Tomorrow 🗓️ At 2pm. I'll be live, on zoom, in this community. Join me, and I'll give you the framework. You can def figure it out on your own. I did. And look at me... It took me 3 years tho 💩 It could take you 60 mins 😎 Here's the link: https://us06web.zoom.us/meeting/register/2WidShR8TKmW1cDFDqhZNQ (2pm PST)