@Yuvaraj A Hey man! Would love to review your work but the link doesnt seem to be working :( Try resending it and ill take a look at your work

@Amayer Alam Hey bro! Just added some comments in your doc. It started out strong with an attention-grabbing SL. I like how youre direct and want to get straight to the point... thats what its all about right? Straight forward and concise. However, that lacked through the rest of email. There is a lot of improvement to be made in the way youre trying to talk to the readers. It lacks clarity and structure. Avoid abrupt changes between points will make your email smoother and easier to follow. Grammar and formatting are also some issues. Ive tried to correct some but I feel like there has to be an overall re-work of the email. In some of Tysons videos, he talks about AI being a very useful tool. Try looking back at those videos, theres a lot of value in what he says and how it can help resolve this issue. CTA has to be more clearly linked to a value proposition. Overall I do feel like there is a lot of changes to be made. Its very messy and its not getting straight to the point. It needs a better structure, better analogies, more engagement, etc. Honest feedback can sometimes be a little harsh but dont let it bring you down! Try re-writing the email from 0 or try using ChatGPT and Tysons lessons on AI. Keep grinding g!

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LinkedIn is a little more complicated. Its mostly looking for full time jobs and "applying" or the "requirements" to get someone to work with are a lot more difficult. Try getting clients through social media like IG dms, easiest and best way to go imo

Great advice man! Couldn't agree more

@Claude Duru will do!

@Lew Fat never too late