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From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.

👉 The Copy: Here's a fitness sales page headline from a 4D student. Let's take a look at what they made: - For skinny weak men, with low confidence - How you can gain 1kg of muscle per month. With The Build To Last Protocol 🧬 - Without force-feeding yourself to grow. Now before I tear up this headline to shreds, if you want regular 1-on-1 reviews just for you feel free to send me a direct message here on Skool with "SHRED" Let's continue... 👉 The Review: Ok, first of all, get that emoji out of the headline lmao. Second, let's start with the first line: "For skinny weak men with low confidence" ... NOBODY wants to identify themselves subconciously as skinny, weak, and low confidence. So most likely that's gonna hurt you. Instead, talk about something that won't hurt their ego that they are struggling with. Ex. hard-gainers, packing on muscle, etc. Now the main headline: "How you can gain 1kg of muscle per month. With The Build To Last Protocol" - What is the "Build to last protocol"??? That sounds like a B.S. unique mechanism, or a program name. I wouldn't include that in this specific headline. - Change from "How you" to "How I" or "How they" - Add some more spice. Now the last bit: "Without force-feeding yourself to grow" That works, it's not as big of a deal as the other parts of the headline, but there's still room for improvement. Here's the updated headline 👇 - Struggling to fill out your frame? - How I Pack On 1 KG Of Muscle Per Month With A "Skinny" Protocol - Sustainably bulk up without adding fat (even if you're a hard-gainer) See ya'll next week!

Yooooooooo, wassup 4D family. Some of you already know, but I know a lot of you don't. If you want your copy/outreach reviewed, or your questions answers by a 6-figure copywriter on my team, then join the FREE live calls 2x per week. They're held in the Discord community stage every Wednesday and every Saturday, both at 9 AM EST. The review calls are always recorded and posted in the #resources channel of the Discord, but you should show up if you can so you can get your own stuff reviewed. Plus, I pop in there from time to time. Here's the link to the Wednesday call in Discord - https://discord.com/events/1053093919816175646/1364896078800879616 Here's the link to the Saturday call in Discord - https://discord.com/events/1053093919816175646/1363784979435225209 Like always, take notes. Your #1 fan, Professor 4D. P.S. These calls are held in the "Pickle Stage", see the screenshot below.