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ONLY experienced ones..... help me please
It's related to outreach.......your help would really mean a lot to me. This is complicated for me, I got a prospect who sells prequalified leads to biz owners and agencies by uniquely running ads, so basically he runs ads....... But he doesn't have a proper client acquisition system for himself IMO, His Insta bio takes you to a YT video of 1 hr and from there he has a link to book a 1-1 meeting, which is just a Calendly page .... He doesn't have a proper landing page with all his testimonials in one place, so I think this is where his money is leaking... I did outreach to him, but iam not sure if I did it right. Can anyone with experience guide me if I did anything wrong?
ONLY experienced ones..... help me please
1 like โ€ข Oct 3
I havenโ€˜t really got any experience, but I think you could have formulated your massage clearer and the grammar. the second text seemed a bit desperat you could say but also it wasnโ€˜t really wrong. If I were him it yould just be a bit too much to explain to a stranger how my funnel works and stuff would just be too much.
OUTREACH REVIEW
drop yours and review mine: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ch1KlT_pjyx6Mhler4hgIjl1jr8k29TIdW_5ojDfA2g/edit?tab=t.dptwm571ov1t
0 likes โ€ข Oct 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZF4ylmj2aZayHsijMzwX0s5QUtZIInXrcD89NYEPAEc/edit
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
0 likes โ€ข Oct 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZF4ylmj2aZayHsijMzwX0s5QUtZIInXrcD89NYEPAEc/edit
wanna review some copies?
I'll review yours too. Cheers
0 likes โ€ข Jul 17
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IrCR8U0j5SCPA64OjsvQGMmtgRYh9FzgZyIbgbFmC5Q/edit
Copy review
Drop your recent copy for review Like this post too ๐Ÿ‘
0 likes โ€ข Jul 17
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IrCR8U0j5SCPA64OjsvQGMmtgRYh9FzgZyIbgbFmC5Q/edit
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Lukas Xie
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