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@Paulo Costa, The Roaster not really, I been doing this for years, so is my own experience basically.

Sure! And happy to help

Hi Brian, is this a community you run for Brandon? I guess it is. The website has more connecting info, that explains why to join, and the importance for a shared practice, the feedback they'll get and more, I suggest to bring more of that into the community.

Hi Dennis, I think the language you're using isn't really calling in your people. Why you? Why do they need this? What's the faith-based approach? Why does it matter right now? And how will they feel in this space? Write it from your heart, not from a copy-paste AI approach. Makes sense?

Hi Marieke, welcome and thank you for being open to receiving feedback! I specialize in helping Spiritual Business Heart-led owners explain their services and connect with people, especially because what we offer is intangible and needs subtle, energetic communication that attracts people more through resonance than through a formula-driven marketing copy. That said: Your About Page copy is a little bitgeneric. You talk about Inner Peace and Calm like any other healer, but your vision is missing. How does that peace, that calm actually feel? Why do you believe it's important to step out of the chaos and the mind and into a different inner state? Why you? What is your experience, your story, your truth, your techniques, your voice? Something that makes people feel... Yes! She's the one, she will understand me, she will hold me, she aligns with my energy and my values. What they will experience doesn't speak about the transformation but about what's included in your community. It may be intentional, but I believe it should say Live Sessions, Q&A, etc. rather than 'life.' Instead of... "Discover how to release what holds you back, find calm and focus, make confident choices and show up with strength. Don't settle for ordinary learning. Step into a space that nurtures growth with guidance and community. Create the inner calm and growth you've been searching for!" What about this: Imagine a life free of doubt, fear and stress, where every day you can connect with your inner self and feel at peace, strong and confident in the steps and decisions you make. Inner peace is not something only Tibetan monks can reach. You can also have that state as a regular person who works, feels, takes care of their family and wants the best... (not those exact words, yours, but the idea is to paint the state and the emotion. In your current copy that emotion is missing.) The link to your website and calendar can be a trap. Too many different calls to action. If your goal is for people to join the community, remove the distractions and let them join. Once inside, you can share more about yourself, your 1:1 and other services.

@Marieke Arts of course