Now... How are you trying to figure out how to tell it? And what's holding you back?

The forge analysis for my feature. 👀😍 This is awesome really! First off, listening to it out loud there are bits I can hear I want to change. - how yet I’m not sure. And the question to tighten certain bits is so helpful. ( along with everyone’s notes from yesterday ) I’m going to give myself a day or two ( probably a day as everytime I say a few days it ends up being a day or a few hours before I go in and make changes. ) but I’m going to give myself some time to to just think. Or not think. And come back with even more ideas. I’m finding the more of the story I have ( I have the full story down ) but The scenes inbetween are harder to tighten. ( especially the scenes I shared yesterday) But this is part of the process. It’s like a puzzle 👀 This is awesome work David this app is so handy. 👀 Thank you sm. 🥰