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Filter Words Query in 1st Person novels
Hi. I am currently editing my novel. It's in the first person and I was told from a previous writing competition that I should remove the filter words as they create distance between you and the reader. (e.g. I saw, I heard, I realised etc...) However, I wonder if there are situations where it is okay to leave them in and I wanted to check if anyone has any general rules with removing filter words or knows of any good books or online articles about them. e.g. 1) If it is in speech and one of the characters says 'I saw something in the dark'- okay to leave in as it's in speech?. 2) She heard me call her name and ignored me- okay as not the main character in the filter? (e.g. she heard and not I heard?) 3) I saw him on the overhead TV screen. (Okay as the main character is watching a TV screen?) as opposed to 'I saw him come towards me' (which could have the filter removed with 'He came towards me'. ) 4) 'I couldn’t believe no one else heard it.' okay as hearing is the central focus? 5) 'I saw no sign of him'. Okay as a common expression? I'd been really keen to hear other people's experiences and expertise at editing out filter words and if there is a general technique for it. I'm just looking for a general quick set of rules if possible. If anyone knows of any that would be really helpful. Thanks so much.
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Hi. That's very interesting. The film reminds me a bit of sleep paralysis.
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I had high hopes for this excellent idea to create a writers’ forum. But disappointingly your idea has provided yet another promotional platform. I guess that is what the authors’ ecosystem has become. Shame.
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Hi. Maybe it would be easier if there was a thread set up purely for those offering services, so that it would all be listed under one place, making it easier for members to find it? It would also mean that if you're not looking for anything like that, it's easier to leave it? I thought the blow your own trumpet thread was for offering services? @Issy McCann Thanks.
Where are you currently stuck in your writing journey?
Quick question for everyone here Which part of the writing process challenges you the most right now? A) Starting the manuscript B) Finishing it C) Editing & polishing D) Formatting & publishing E) Marketing & getting reviews I’m curious to see where most writers struggle.
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c) Editing and Polishing. I'm just finishing the line edit of my Fantasy novel which is taking a while to do. I'm about 80% of the way through it before I give it to a beta reader. Looking forward to reaching point D) even though I'm sure that's one of the hardest parts. :)
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@Lynn Walker Hi. It's more of a tightening prose, although it's also helping me to tidy up a few small elements of the story in terms of details and consistency.
Editing preferences
When editing a novel (say a document of 75,000 words ) do you prefer to edit on the screen or print out the entire thing and get busy with pencils and red pens?
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Hi. For my latest story I printed it out for the three structural edits, but now I'm on the line editing, I'm using word audio to read out my novel and editing it directly on the computer. For looking at the first draft, it definitely helped to print it out and read it on paper, until the line editing stage.
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Kathryn Brown
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Hi. I'm a Fantasy writer. I'm currently line editing the first book in my Fantasy Trilogy and I've written about 10,000 words of the second novel.

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