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Filter Words Query in 1st Person novels
Hi. I am currently editing my novel. It's in the first person and I was told from a previous writing competition that I should remove the filter words as they create distance between you and the reader. (e.g. I saw, I heard, I realised etc...) However, I wonder if there are situations where it is okay to leave them in and I wanted to check if anyone has any general rules with removing filter words or knows of any good books or online articles about them. e.g. 1) If it is in speech and one of the characters says 'I saw something in the dark'- okay to leave in as it's in speech?. 2) She heard me call her name and ignored me- okay as not the main character in the filter? (e.g. she heard and not I heard?) 3) I saw him on the overhead TV screen. (Okay as the main character is watching a TV screen?) as opposed to 'I saw him come towards me' (which could have the filter removed with 'He came towards me'. ) 4) 'I couldn’t believe no one else heard it.' okay as hearing is the central focus? 5) 'I saw no sign of him'. Okay as a common expression? I'd been really keen to hear other people's experiences and expertise at editing out filter words and if there is a general technique for it. I'm just looking for a general quick set of rules if possible. If anyone knows of any that would be really helpful. Thanks so much.
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Thanks @James Blair . Just searched for him and he looks really interesting. World of Books, here I come!
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@James Blair Wow, that sounds wonderful! Thank you!
Publication options
Is it ever a good idea to accept a hybrid publication offer?
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What is a hybrid publication offer?
Disappointment
I had high hopes for this excellent idea to create a writers’ forum. But disappointingly your idea has provided yet another promotional platform. I guess that is what the authors’ ecosystem has become. Shame.
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@Daniel Jeffreys Oh really? I think that person is doing the same to me. They've started by asking "what sort of writing I like", which I think is a strange way to phrase the question.
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Okay! Apologies @Issy McCann! You've clearly got this covered. Ignore my message above.
Where are you currently stuck in your writing journey?
Quick question for everyone here Which part of the writing process challenges you the most right now? A) Starting the manuscript B) Finishing it C) Editing & polishing D) Formatting & publishing E) Marketing & getting reviews I’m curious to see where most writers struggle.
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This is a great question. It's an E for me. I have a tiny collection of short stories available on amazon and others, but I don't have a budget and since Twitter/X stopped being fluffy, I've struggled to find my loudspeaker. Getting published by someone else is pretty hard too😄
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@Lynn Walker 😄I'm not sure I can offer any insights there! I'm also very time-poor. I meant a social media channel really. I did get a few reviews which was nice.
Exercises to flex writing muscles
Hello everyone. Just wondering, do any of you ever do writing exercises? In the past, I've found them fun and useful for freeing up my brain and subconscious etc. I was thinking I should do some, so looking for new ones. Can you recommend any?
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Thank you @Dreena Collins that sounds like a great exercise and also an excuse to eat loads of delicious foods 👍😄
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Oh I love Kate Grenville but didn't know she'd written a writing book. I'll have a look for it. Thanks 😊
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Juno Baker
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I'm a writer who struggles to write a tweet-sized bio, but I'm always working on a short story or two, and a novel (or two). I tend to be time poor.

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