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First para (although I suppose I have two but one's a preface)
My sister and I are the only two surviving children of nine. (I think it was nine. It may have been one or two more. Or less.) Some of us died shortly after birth. Some lingered a little longer only to be felled by some ague or fever. One (the first Jack who lived before I was born) fell into the Thames from the attic window. Only Beth and I had lasted to an age where adulthood looked likely. I’d been apprenticed to my father. I was destined to become a master printer and inherit his shop on London Bridge. Beth remained unmarried.
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Thank you @Chris Sato . This page is set in 1641 just before the first of the English Civil Wars begins.
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Thank you @MaryAnne Christy. I really wanted to check whether it was something to do with the tone or the voice, for example. I'm aware that I'm female writing from a male perspective. It sort of just turned out that way, but I do worry that the voice might not come across as male.
Best Books
What textbook or manual has taught you the most about writing, and why?
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Never heard of Save the Cat - I'll have a look for it. I love The Art of Fiction by David Lodge, and The Science of Storytelling by William Storr, which from the look of my shelf, it seems my son must have pilfered! 🤔
Do you work on multiple pieces at once?
I avoid it for the most part, although not for any strategic reason... Although I'm tempted on occasion. I would love to know the stance of others here, their reasons and (for those that work on multiple pieces) experiences.
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I always seem to have lots of things in the very early stages (notes in a notebook, bits that I got obsessed with one afternoon) a few things that are more developed and then the 'main big project' which takes years and many hours. I like to have short things to work on, especially when I need to take a break from the 'main big project'. They're useful if you want to try something new, experiment with an approach or a voice or something like that. And you can dip in and out of them. It's good to have something you can come back to with fresh eyes and read in one sitting and then think about. I work full time so I find this works well for me, otherwise I might be inclined to devote myself entirely to my 'main big project'.
One Sentence Summaries
One of the hardest tasks, I know. Leave a one sentence summary of one of your pieces here for constructive feedback. And contribute your own assessments of the work of others.
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@Nazmin Rahman I love the first line, but think the bit after 'double life spirals' could be more pithy.
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@Louis Urbanowski I love 'a cure for IBS', but why do you make the point that Tom is 'shetered' in the summary?
Intermittent Warlords
Natalya knelt just inside the mouth of the cave, fussing with a piece of chalk. Her calloused hands made slow, sure arcs, carving a circle on the ground. She was a Lorne-viola, which was a nice way of saying she occasionally stuck out; violet skin, onyx hair still up in the large Velcro rollers, eyes like smouldering coals. She still needed to do her makeup. She wore a turquoise jumpsuit that left her back and arms bare. She’d left the house in a rush, half-preparing for a party, half-preparing for a hunt; the work-life balance was still being figured out. She opened the hatch of the little carrier by her side and pulled out a small white rabbit, holding him at eye level. He busily munched away on a piece of lettuce, surveying her with calm disdain. “This is kidnapping, this is,” he said after a while, which Natalya wasn’t quite sure how to engage with.
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I love your imagination. So much here is wonderful, but I found it a lot to take in at once. I'd have liked to spend more time seeing what Natalya was doing with the chalk at the mouth of the cave, to have had more of a close-up.
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Juno Baker
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I'm a writer who struggles to write a tweet-sized bio, but I'm always working on a short story or two, and a novel (or two). I tend to be time poor.

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