@Katherine Pearson Helping your friend? What exactly do you mean? Whats the favor?

@Katherine Pearson I'm still a bit confused. You introduced yourself as a designer focusing on improving skills but then stated that you're here helping your friend pass on an offer. Then you asked for a favor and when asked what the favor was, you mentioned that your friend is offering a free website. What exactly are your intentions here in this group? Are you here to learn and grow with like-minded people? Are you here to help your friend give away free websites? Im just asking so I know how to help and engage.

Hey, cool video. I do see some room for improvement. First thing that comes to mind is the overall pacing. Its pretty slow to get to the information. I'd say speed up the overall timing of each section to get to the next. The sections with the Radial white dots (screenshot attached) feel a tad bit unnecessary, making the video drag out a bit more. Lastly, I'd reconfigure the "Our Services" section to fill up the space more to really showcase the work. Id also add more motion to that section as well so that it continues to have a sense of flow and not come to abrupt stops. Final part about this section, While this might sound like im going against my original feedback, i'd slow this section down a bit. You have a bunch of text for the viewer to read but not enough time is allotted for them to read.

Oh and theres need to be a CTA (call to action) at the end so that people have something to do after watching.

Honestly, man, i think your work is dope. I don't really have many notes on "Stand Alone" design. For the "Stand Out" design, the trail and rocket don't feel like they are connected to the messaging as well as the chess piece did.