My only couple of pieces of feedback are: 1. firm up the net profit of one or the other % as if it's happened, because ranges say to your brain: "they are still open and haven't actually happened," and what we are writing about is "it has happened" and how you feel about that. not as if it's going to happen. 2. Look to see if you put enough sensory details into sights, sounds, smells, and feelings into all that you wrote about. 3. Maybe even try to write about what you see for your wife, Danielle, and some things she has accomplished, and what your daughters, Reagan and Amelia, are also pursuing or have accomplished outside of school. Your FUTURE Self story is great as is, but if you want to go deeper, these are just suggestions. 🙂.