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Commended Entries: First Announcement
Many, many entries this cycle, well beyond what we had anticipated, and the standard of the writing has made winnowing the longlist unusually difficult. Thank you to everyone who trusted us with their opening pages. The quality was so high that the commended list is longer than in previous cycles. We are releasing the names in no particular order, over the coming days, and a shortlist will be drawn from this group. Today, in no particular order, we are announcing: - Lies on Sale by Gabby Martini - The Impossibility of Eden by Harry Wilson - Beach Dog by Tom McDonough - The Breaking Point by Fiona Harriet - The Taste of Iron by Ramona Slusarczyk - Askar and the Witch by Nina van der Beek - The City of a Thousand Eyes by Angelique Talbot - The Melusine Murders by Jesse Weiner Congratulations to all of them. Many further entries, equally commended, will be announced over the coming days. If your name is not yet here, please don't read into its absence. Names are being released in the order we can write the posts, which has nothing to do with preference, and every remaining commendation carries the same weight as those above.
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Well done everyone. Fingers crossed for those of us not on today's list.
Refresh… refresh… refresh…
It’s not even 9am yet, & I’ve already checked in about 5 times. Surely I am not alone 😅🙈
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Me too....
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@Lorna Riley yes please.
One line pitch help (again) please!
Hello all, could you take a look at this and tell me if it would pique your interest? "Judy is a capable wife and an exacting mother, not the dependent old woman her daughters want her to be." Thanks as ever!
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Hi Cressida, I agree with @Tiffany Valdelievre - this feels like a statement and not a pitch for a story at the moment- I would use expand to give a hint at that, eg - Judy is a capable wife and an exacting mother, not the dependent old woman her daughters want her to be. So there's clearly going to be trouble if they think they can shove her off into a care home easily. (I' m totally guessing the story here ...)
Toxic positivity and feedback.
Hi there all! I received some (not M&C) competition feedback this morning. I've had bad experiences with feedback in the past, with comments that had little to do with my manuscript or were bland generic restatings of the submission guidelines. In this case the reader clearly had read and commented directly on the submission, praised the prose, the plotting and the use of formatting and epistolary elements... Once my heart settled a little I realised that it gave me absolutely nothing to work on, nothing to improve. It's not as though it was the greatest thing their readers had ever seen, I didn't make the list let alone place. Where do you go for constructive feedback? Are there competitions and publications/sites that you've found helpful on the past? Does the necessity of payment go hand in hand with people just wanting to please you?
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Hi @James Blair I had very helpful feedback from Marlowe and Christie and the Cheshire Novel Prize (both effectively paid for); I've had paid for feedback from Curtis Browne Creative that really did nothing to help; then the most useful feedback I've had is from trusted readers. I met them via Curtis Browne Creative (CBC) courses which meant we had already shared what sort of thing we are working on, what we are aiming for etc. CBC have just started a writing studio (which I have joined) . This effectively runs as a forum for giving feedback and sharing elements of craft etc.
The Right Members Club
Hi everyone. Hope you're keeping well. Just wanted to share that my debut novel (indie self published) is holding its own on Amazon two weeks after launch. The Right Members Club is a political satire in the vein of The Thick of It crossed with humour from something like Peep Show. It's been a blast promoting it and I've delighted to say I'm approaching 150 copies sold, 10 great reviews and about 6,000 kindle page reads. It's been picked up by a local bookstore and I've got a bunch of events in the diary to go and talk about it. If anyone wants to check it out https://www.amazon.co.uk/Right-Members-Club-Louis-Urbanowski-ebook/dp/B0GPR9W5MH/ref=sr_1_1?dib=eyJ2IjoiMSJ9.EuoWXEwY2-g2j_L6r6h-kw.KCR0XKHFOq9jgnI7HGOmO0JCZ5uB4nIRNWRnl_3QiEI&dib_tag=se&keywords=the+right+members+club&qid=1775371003&s=books&sr=1-1 I'm also on Instagram as @UrbWrites and Substack as same name. Have a lovely evening! Cheers, Louis
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Brilliant - that's a great cover too. Sounds like a fab story.
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Jo Austen
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Magic Realism, folk horror and all things slightly (or very) weird

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