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8h •
Review mine and I'll review yours ASAP
Let's Grow By Pushing Each Other in a Friendly Copy Roast https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IgnxfJ35jLOw3vFraIxQs7I01id_V7abHmwSyRo0H0o/edit?usp=drivesdk
1 like • 6h
@Zuko Kebile I'd recommend to keep the first line simple and clear. Seems like you combined two sentences. You can start it like, Are you struggling to talk to women?(Direct to the reader) You're in the right place ......... (You don’t hesitate. You don’t overthink every word like it’s a court case. You don’t feel like you need to “get it right.”) Put it in bullet points (When you like the man in the mirror Everything changes) Don't talk about same reference twice. Do it rarely. Some grammatical errors Other than that it's good for a beginner level copy. You can add story to convey emotion and pain points. You've got the potential, keep learning 🙌
1 like • 5h
@Zuko Kebile Great research bro. Then you can make it into two separate lines. A complex sentence isn't recommended in Copywriting. Yeah man, let's grind and get our first clients 💪. All the best 🙌
4d •
No one is reviewing your copy?
Don't be shy, ladies and gentlemen, drop your copy to be cooked if you have confidence in what you wrote. Well, here's mine https://docs.google.com/document/d/18mxxxmkRQyU5vDQzV3Dhr-bQuQOUSzQvmWwb90wd1-s/edit?usp=sharing
1 like • 3d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_0qJh8MDYSxLrS0hW_jntoullf2kHhSA6dGLFv2psTw/edit?usp=drivesdk Here's mine and I'll review yours
0 likes • 8h
@Victor Onwurah Thanks!
30d •
first time posting an email. Reviews needed
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NaVjqjziRQKnZYxistF1_khrvAPAD9ed-s1zlxFKG-I/edit?usp=sharing this is my first time posting an email for reviews. its up to you guys.
0 likes • 28d
Can you review it. I think it's much better than my previous one https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o5ZU7QtXe74tw0N8WX-uNt18MQwFNl9j7DkHE4SYkcM/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • 3d
@Ayisha Moideen Mind if you review it please? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_0qJh8MDYSxLrS0hW_jntoullf2kHhSA6dGLFv2psTw/edit?usp=drivesdk
28d •
The review time
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bhKbMYlbHVhRo5HZwyouJ-daU2ab-_PUUGmNsayY6rw/edit?usp=sharing
2 likes • 24d
@Muhammed K I'll add more proofs
0 likes • 3d
@Muhammed K you down for another review please? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_0qJh8MDYSxLrS0hW_jntoullf2kHhSA6dGLFv2psTw/edit?usp=drivesdk
Aug '25 •
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
0 likes • 28d
Guys please review my copy and rate it out of 10 and feedbacks are appreciated ♥️ https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SWwgN0MQ9loWDE7Y7Yipum_RL1WvJA6iquDskJlvuvg/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • 3d
None is reviewing my copy 😭. Someone please review it, I wanna grow https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_0qJh8MDYSxLrS0hW_jntoullf2kHhSA6dGLFv2psTw/edit?usp=drivesdk
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@jivi-tridip-6911
Improving my copies everyday. Dropping informational content on YouTube for business owners
Active 4h ago
Joined Aug 21, 2025
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