Please review my email. It is a practice email i wrote for a relationship coach. https://docs.google.com/document/d/18gwomKtblBcA9uUOQDMODdCWlR1FPTPtxQL6GKl-dG0/edit?usp=sharing
My take on your copy: - The SL could be reworked, not good enough - The way your points are explained looks very bad, it lacks flow and all sentences are short with full stops - You probably should have applied the rule of 3 ( your points ) - CTA good but could be improved
Please review my email, rate 1-10. Drop yours for a review as well https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-V0uO_vrycivf6iVnTl74KYOxnBqCUzQjJPAyrWHh6A/edit?usp=drivesdk