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45 contributions to 4D Copywriting Community
Aug '24 •
URGENT‼️
Hey @everyone, I’m interested in connecting with those of you who are currently working with clients. If you’re actively engaged with a client and are open to discussing your experiences, or if you’re curious about what this entails, please drop a comment. This is a great opportunity for us to learn from each other, network, and grow together. Looking forward to the conversations! Feel free to adjust it as needed! If anyone interested to join and hear this conversation DM me
1 like • Aug '24
@Marybelle Calipayan “Hey [first name]” is a very common intro. Maybe I’m fed up with that while reviewing, but it does the job. The introductory email could be written in a better way using the same framework. Don’t just think about telling something to your audience while writing, but think about the framework or copywriting formulas. Your other emails look as good as any other copy. There are a few spelling mistakes that I found, so run it through Grammarly. And also just saying, I’m planning to do something and need your opinion on that. Do you mind DMing me?
0 likes • Aug '24
@Alfiya Khan good I like that it’s short, SL is good the copy narrows down into a course, everything is there except one thing One thing Story telling, we know you get benefits and we they know your selling them stuff via mail but it wouldn’t feel like it when you seem to be personal. And on top of that story add coulour Just add a small sensory rich and well described small story In the middle
Jul '24 •
I NEED HELP‼️‼️
Hey guys, I’ve been doing copywriting for close to 2 months now. I write decent copies, but I know there’s room for improvement. Over the past 10-15 days, I’ve been reaching out to 2-5 people per day via email, but unfortunately, I haven’t received any responses. It’s quite frustrating and disappointing that I haven’t even had the chance to be rejected. Email outreach through X platform seems too expensive, and Instagram just doesn’t seem to work for me. It’s disheartening to see others closing clients within a week of outreach. Did I do something wrong? Could someone explain: • Effective outreach strategies? • How to find potential clients? • Best practices for outreach? If your suggestions align with my actions, does that mean I’m just unlucky?
1 like • Jul '24
@Micheal Beest no 👎 Never do that If you drop your mail I will farward you my best mails I sent
2 likes • Jul '24
@Micheal Beest sure… drop your id
Jul '24 •
I'll review your copy!!
I'll review your copy if you review mine! If you send me direct copies, I'll not review yours https://docs.google.com/document/d/12g7qcX7jinr0bWKPYBzo6rN_ACzg4xe108RFO3d6ndc/edit
0 likes • Jul '24
@Faris Ganija don’t use chat gpt too much just use it to amplify ur mail better I see you going with problem, aggregate and solution frame work Your aggregate is weak And you the solution you presented is fine but could be better transition Just write more copy’s you’ll be good to go!!
0 likes • Jul '24
@Zakki Ahmed tbh I don’t really know about ig script but going through as if someone was saying it on a reel is good in my imagination, as I really don’t know about it I can’t really talk about it. But regardless it’s good not bad I could say
Jul '24 •
HELP!!
i need someone to give me suggestions for my copys SL and PT https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z5qKQDsBWXRopj8Hn_auPjQee1cATgNStu5hULbhymY/edit?usp=sharing heres my copy pls do review it too
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