very well said @Tyson FourDee

I am doing it for the freedom I want in my life as well as the future I want my family to have

Done I reviewed your one as well

@Abby Haste To be totally honest the email is not that good. But you are starting out so keep practicing hard. The email itself in not that intruding so it dosen't make the reader want to take the time out of his day to read it. To be honest I didn't know what you were promoting until I read it to the last end. Up until the end I thought that it was a mindset program, then only I saw the training part.Try to use a structure as tyson has said Like the COmpile framework or even the HSO structure. These are very good when it comes to email copywriting.

Here is mine mate. Got back into copywriting after a break. rate it and be brutally honest. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IfPQBNxk3nNnfWlws2PMSqYE1A8Y_zN6AHC_CXF60UM/edit?usp=sharing

@Abubeker Ayoo I reviewed it. The email is good, go and check the points that I have added. ls remember to like this

@David Ochade Hi mate I wrote an email for the same dating coach you were writing about. check it out. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IfPQBNxk3nNnfWlws2PMSqYE1A8Y_zN6AHC_CXF60UM/edit?usp=sharing