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TODAY'S TOPIC::: GIRLS GUIDE **Learn to manage fear of failures **Hadiat lainay kay liye khud ko hdiat kay liye tyar karien **Rizq sirf paisa nai hota ap ka sans laina bhi rizq hay **Dusrnu ki tareef karna bhi reham main ata hay Got to know about emotional intelligence..(6 pillars) i will work on it more. Shukar bhi creative tareekay say karo alpha energy vali vedio main haroon bhai nay aik formula btya tha kay jub koi ap kay liye negative bolta uss main say apna faida nikalo ... i tried it with my nand ... vo jub bhi ati unn ki kuj batien mujay trigger karti the but this time I have different energy just because of this community

📌 One Thing I Want to Remember Starting the day early with prayer, caring for my son, and staying committed to learning reminded me that balance between deen, family, and work is true success. Alhamdulillah for strength and patience. 😴 Sleep & Wake Time - Wake up: 6:00 AM - Sleep: 1:00 AM 📅 Timeline of My Day 6:00 – 8:30 AM Woke up at 6:00 AM and prayed namaz with zikr. Woke my son gently so we could start the day together. Went to the kitchen and prepared breakfast. Helped my son eat and get ready for school.Had my breakfast: 60g roti with 2-egg omelette and half cup tea (without sugar). Felt energized and grateful. 9:00 – 10:00 AM Cleaned the room, arranged things properly, and organized toys outside the room. Felt calm after decluttering. 10:00 – 11:00 AM Prepared lunch early so I could fully focus on desk work and learning later. 11:00 AM – 2:00 PM Searched jobs on Upwork. Watched Haroon Bhai’s session with Umair Bajwa Bhai, made detailed notes, sent leads, and stayed engaged in learning. Productive and focused hours. 2:00 – 4:00 PM My son came back from school. Hugged him, listened to his stories, and shared lots of giggles. Changed his uniform, made lunch for him, and helped him eat. Alhamdulillah for these precious bonding moments. 4:00 – 6:00 PM Watched outreach-related videos, made notes, and added important points to my document for future reference. 6:00 – 7:00 PM Prepared dinner and managed house chores. Felt responsible and grounded. 7:00 – 9:00 PM Attended a learning session and stayed attentive. 9:00 – 10:00 PM Put my son to sleep with cuddles and loving talks. Discussed his favorite topic — planets. Felt deeply connected and thankful. 10:00 – 11:00 PM Scrolled Instagram for about half an hour and then wrote my journal. 11:00 PM – 1:00 AM Practiced dummy bidding. 🔱 Day Close Section 🌟 Wins of the Day - Woke up early and started the day with prayer and zikr (Alhamdulillah) - Balanced learning, work, and motherhood well - Spent quality time with my son and nurtured him with love - Consistent learning and dummy bidding practice

Day 4 ka journal nh likh paya, khas productive nh tha and I was mentally not available due to a problem I was facing but Now ALHAMDULILLAH wo problem ALLAH pak ne mazedar tariqe se solve krdi and usko ek achai me badal dia Aaj ka din bht haseen tha, Family, Community, productivity sab best they Me soch raha tha k jis din mera din mere hisab se acha nh guzra hota us din me na shukri kr raha hota hun actual me wo din bh acha hota hai bus mjhe us din sirf burai nazar ati hai and aese time me ab me foran ALLAH pak ka shukar ada krta hun and foran day change hojata haiOth kr zuhar parhi, nashta order kia foodpanda homechef se, same order double place hogya jiske bad foodpanda customer care ki ek ghalti samne ai jisme wo keh rhe they k application me ja kr cancel kren and me keh raha tha k koi option nh hai but phr bh wo keh rhe they we cant help you and aap application me ja kr cancel kren mene kaha option nh hai but wo … isi tarah chalta raha phr mene kaha theek hai bhai thank you and restaurant wale se direct contact hogya jahan pe order place kia tha, jiski wajah se mene unse direct menu manglia kio k wo direct delivery bh krte hen, to kafi ache rates mil gae, Foodpanda pe boiled egg 130 ka 1 tha and direct hume 70 ka 1 boiled egg milega abse which was a huge win for me ( hehe sarcasm ) Asar parhi, desk pe aya, chotay motay kam kie like replies on whatsapp, community membership requests ko dekh bhal kr approve krna, Instagram pe new msgs k replies krna, Maghrib parh kr again desk pe aya, office hours live session kia Phr Asim k sath kam plan kia, Ali and Asim ne join kia for AI Automation and agentic AI course planning Uske bad Umair bajwa ka make money ka session, khana, family time Phr rat me waleed bhai k sath scripting ki for a youtube video and foran video film krli ( scripting ka pora process and filming ka process recorded hai Make money on skool wali community me content creation k course me add hoga ) Filming k bad video trim ki export pe lagai for editor