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9d •
RIP THIS DRAFT APART (earn a like)
Tell me exactly the bottlenecks of my email. Find the friction points and tell me where the value drops off. Leave your review below, and the profile likes are yours. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TuvNyLB9nyNC4XUVrwYkacXEXCKp7CgNqjb7rlJRVKE/edit?usp=sharing
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11d •
FIND THE LEAKS IN MY COPY and DROP YOUR COPY BELOW too
Where is the exact moment the prospect gets bored and stops reading this? I need another set of eyes to find the friction before I send this out. Roast it in the comments, and I’ll return the favor with a like. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LV5yQQE8zx2JXTGJC3na5STVJcENlZO81Ozje_IjQp4/edit?usp=sharing
20d •
TEAR THIS DRAFT TO SHREDS
I'm looking for the exact bottleneck in this email. Where does the value drop off? Where does the reader get bored? Point it out below. I’ll pay your review with a like https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PVn7dCmBcwT0Qp9Euml68PA9iyOCXWrWq0yrCQm1BU0/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • 20d
@Joseph Strijkers alright
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@Antonin Strouhal thanks man
21d •
TEAR APART MY EMAIL COPY (And Earn a Like)
I need honest, no-fluff feedback on my latest email draft to maximise conversions. Point out the exact bottlenecks, and tell me exactly where the value breaks down. Drop your review below, and I’ll return the favour by hitting your profile with a like. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RrHC2i2PXw3TjUppIY8K6GEOLxbV15PBY5Lxoo_Nvcc/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • 20d
@Joma Veta appreciate it
0 likes • 20d
@Bilal Safeer thanks man
26d •
The review time
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bhKbMYlbHVhRo5HZwyouJ-daU2ab-_PUUGmNsayY6rw/edit?usp=sharing
2 likes • 22d
Hey man really good copy but here are a few problems that I found and how you can fix it: 1.You are speaking to "many business owners." If you sell to everyone, you sell to no one. Who specifically is this for? E-commerce founders? Agency owners? Call them out directly so they feel like this was written exclusively for them. 2.You are pitching an "ebook." Ebooks have terrible perceived value because they sound like a massive time commitment. To improve the value equation, decrease the perceived effort. Reposition this as a "7-Step Playbook," a "Blueprint," or a "Cheat Sheet." It needs to sound like they can implement it in 10 minutes. If it was helpful leave a like.
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@bhavya-patel-9120
I’m 17
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