Both of them are fine. I like how your personality comes across (you've got the personal brand down! 🙂) BUT the lack of sync between video and sound really bothers me, but maybe that's just me! Also the graphic with the retention rate etc. is a bit confusing to the brain on first look because you have the higher percentage lower on the chart. I know they're not measuring the same thing and it's not really a chart.. but it nevertheless caused a brain glitch for me. With the testimonial, I wanted to have time to read it, but it went off screen before I could. Hope that helps!

@Lion Fludd

@Laura Paulina In my opinion, what you have now is MUCH better!

@Laura Paulina You're welcome. I'm so glad it was helpful!

@Joe Sargent Thanks for you feedback! I appreciate it!

@Elliott Robertson Thanks so much for your feedback!

Congrats @Dr. Severine Bryan

Although it looks kinda cool, I find the dark background and bright lettering a little hard on the eyes. At first glance, I also have no clue what this is 😂 But I don't know who your target market is. Perhaps for them it'll make total sense. As I scroll down and read the text to try to understand, I don't gain much clarity. (The text also sounds very AI-generated. Again, for your audience, that may not be a problem.) As I read further down... I start to get a little bored tbh (sorry!)... it seems like a lot of cool sounding stuff (I like the squirrel creativity!) that doesn't really get quickly enough to the point of how it helps me — in a way that I could actually believe. Again, I'm probably not your audience, so take this with a grain of salt. I know this is a mock-up, so it's not actually real. But it gives such a strong impression of not being real that I'd worry about the finished product. I personally wouldn't trust a website that looked like this in a million years. Even though it's about an AI-based product, I want/need to be able to trust the human behind the wheel. Again, this might be an audience mismatch thing. Hope something in there is helpful...