Hi. Everyone I stopped copywriting for a week so that I could make some money to pay for another month’s membership of the real world. Now that I have done that I have gone back to practicing copywriting. I improved some old copy of mine. I would highly appreciate it if anyone could review it and give me feed back on: 1.) Did I answered the 4 questions correctly this time? 2.) Would my copy engage the reader and emotionally affect them. 3.) Have I utilised AI well to create effective copy? 4.) Is this overall good copy for a beginner? And btw ik I shouldn’t be doing copy for businesses like this. I just wanted to improve my old copy before I started up again. After this I will practice by writing copy for small businesses near me. https://docs.google.com/document/d/15-m12VJh1q9FtmPuSb6LdIxSggzagD_SDLvLmBx3Rvw/edit

I bet 99% of you joined this community thinking that others would support you in your copywriting journey. You guys probably joined the discord server with the same mindset, determined that other people will review your copy, Lets say, you post your well-made writing and make a compelling headline in the server , "Please review my copy guys, be as harsh as you like!" And you leave your computer feeling well-accomplished and with no doubt in your mind, LEAST a few people will respond (you wouldn't expect more than 10), right? You come back after a few hours only to see 0 REPLIES. That's cause NO ONE CARES People just want the money and credit for themselves. They don't want to spread their expertise to other like-minded people. They don't have the TIME for you! The reason I made this post is so I can ACTUALLY help writers in their journey. No more unwanted stress or wasted hours of looking for someone to review your copy, Because these are just time killers that will just gradually hold you down,. But why should you trust me? I am currently working with one business model and creating sales pages, emails, and website copy for them. I am also currently learning the skills of Closing and Public Speaking which is essential for long-term results. If you want me to review your copy, you know what to do (post it below). P.S - I highly suggest you leave a like so you can come back whenever (I post weekly, so it will be much harder to keep track unless you leave a like or save it) Cya 😉 (Btw the copy I wrote above was written in 10 minutes, so If there's any errors, realize it's not perfected)

Hi I am a beginner in copywriting. I have have reviewed my piece of copy multiple times and I am having difficulty finding ways to make it more simple but still powerful at the same time. I would highly appreciate it if anyone could review it and give me feedback, as I have already reviewed it myself. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-gp63re0CVuBBQhwpC_I6rph8PCEwXizueNH0exJlVs/edit

Hi, this is my first piece of copy. I would highly appreciate it if people could review it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-gp63re0CVuBBQhwpC_I6rph8PCEwXizueNH0exJlVs/edit