Okay! So this one is a real estate value email. I am approaching a lead and wrote this one based on one of his YouTube testimonial videos (kind of a win podcast). Detailed feedback is appreciated so I can improve; here the email goes: Subject: They stole my method and made $8,000 in 30 days Preview: An insane first try and 10x money 🤑 Yoo %Firstname%, If you’re a real estate wholesaler stuck at a dead-end $20/hour job… …and you keep overthinking your first deal instead of actually doing one. You’ll relate to Jam and Kaye. When we met, they were working graveyard shifts (4 PM–3 AM), broke, tired, and skeptical, And had been burned by an insurance scam run by fake friends, which taught them to be more careful about opportunities Fast forward a month, They took the exact strategies, method, and resources I teach inside my private membership and closed their FIRST deal for $8,000. (That’s too in the FIRST try babbyyy!). Here are the two main things they did: 1. They reached out immediately (no overthinking) The scam made them hungry for legitimate ways to build wealth without exploiting elderly people or compromising their values. Working on the graveyard shift…to… realizing… … they have a MASSIVE advantage if they're willing to bet on themselves instead of following the crowd. While their friends were just accumulating debt, Jam and Kaye understood that being the "dumb kids" who didn't go to college actually positioned them perfectly to build wealth, …giving them the freedom to take risks and invest in themselves without worrying about student loan payments. Now, UNLIKE most wannabe wholesalers who overthink and procrastinate Jam took immediate action. He texted everyone in his phone one simple question: | “Do you know anyone selling a house?” That’s it. One of those messages led to a friend’s grandmother. Deal found. Then they contacted local realtors asking a direct question: | “Do you know any buyers looking for flips?” They understood something most beginners don’t: