🌟 Writing Technique: The Camera Lens Method
Your secret tool for showing, not telling. 👀 Most writers tell their story from the outside…But the most memorable books pull the reader inside the moment, almost like they’re holding a camera and filming the scene themselves. Here’s how to do it: 🎥 THE CAMERA LENS METHOD Before you write a scene, pause and ask: “If this were a movie scene, what would the camera see, hear, and feel?” Then write from the lens, not from your head. 📷 👀 1. Focus on Small, Specific Details Instead of telling: “I was nervous.” 😬 Try showing: “My fingers kept tracing the seam of my jeans, the way they always did when I didn’t know what to say.” Readers feel the moment instead of being told what to feel. 👂 2. Add Sound + Movement Sound makes a scene come alive. Instead of: “It was quiet.” Try: “The kitchen hummed with the low buzz of the refrigerator, the only sound breaking the stillness.” Movement adds energy and emotion. ❤️ 3. Capture the Body Before the Mind The body reacts before we find the words for it. Instead of: “I was furious.” Try: “Heat rushed up my neck, and my jaw locked tight before I could stop it.” Your body tells the truth, even when your mind is trying to catch up. ✨ 4. End the Scene With an Emotional Echo Instead of tying everything up neatly, let the last line leave a ripple. For example: “I walked out before he could say anything else, the weight of his words still pressed between my shoulder blades.” It lingers — that’s what great storytelling does. Now, try the Camera Lens Method today. Rewrite one sentence from your story using sensory detail instead of explaining how you felt. Drop your before + after versions in the comments! I’d love to see them. ❤️ And, if you want to dive more into writing and the process of getting a published book, you can book a time for us to chat!