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🛑 The Restart Cycle Ends Here
If you’ve restarted your book more than twice… It’s not a motivation problem. It’s a clarity problem. Think about it, you can have a heck of a lot of motivation, but if you don’t have the direction, how are you getting there? Many famous authors have a structure at the beginning to help guide them on their path. 💥Dan Brown: Employs detailed outlines that include research, character motivations, and specific plot points to create high-stakes, suspenseful narratives. 💥George R.R. Martin: Uses extensive planning to manage intricate storylines and world-building, which ensures his complex plots maintain direction (think of the books he has completed from this. It has come to my attention that he has fallen off of consistency since readers are still waiting for his new book. This shows us that everyone can have times where they lose their direction.). 👉 What part of your story keeps changing every time you restart? Share your answer in the comments. That’s the piece we lock in first and helps us understand the hole you have within your story. Book a time for us to chat, and let’s find a solution together.
🛑 The Restart Cycle Ends Here
I find it's not motivation with me, it's an over-active storyline creator - I come up with another storyline idea that I just have to put on paper, so to speak - if I don't then it can melt away never to be recaptured. Then, and only then can I settle back onto the original story! 🤷🤦
@Dani Rosenblad James - more like, distracting to the brain. Takes you away so it takes time to get back into the flow if the original story.
Dialogue That Sounds Real
Many writers accidentally make dialogue sound stiff or unnatural. Today we’re practicing natural conversation. 🔥Your Challenge Write a short conversation between two characters where: • one character wants something • the other character is hiding something But neither of them says it directly. Think of how real people talk. 🗣️ We often: • avoid the real topic • speak indirectly • say one thing but mean another Example: Person A: “Did you go to the meeting yesterday?” Person B: “I had a lot going on.” The tension sits between the lines. Rules 🔥 Write at least 10 lines of dialogue 🔥 Use minimal description 🔥 Let the tension show through conversation Bonus Challenge Add one small physical action that reveals what the character is feeling.
Dialogue That Sounds Real
“Yes, I did receive what I was expecting” Muriel stated as she quickly hid it in her reticule, out of sight. “So, what did it say?” Demanded Clara. “Just the usual, arrived safely, you know.” was Muriel's nonchalant reply, as she sipped her tea. “Oh! What, nothing about when he's returning?” “His sister did not mention anything.” “So, what was in it, she must have mentioned something about his arrival and how long he's staying?” “Well, just that he's arrived.” “But there must be more. Take another look “ Clara said, as she tried to grasp the reticule, Muriel pulled it out of her reach. “I don't need to, I told you what it said.” “I cannot believe Catherine did not tell you more. Will he return in time?” “She did not say, so I cannot enlighten you.”
🛠️ Your Book Is Asking Something of You
Not just your time. It’s asking for your honesty. Your attention. Your willingness to not run when it gets uncomfortable. Think about this for a moment. There’s something that our stories want from us more than time. This could be self-reflection, thinking as your ideal reader, understanding what is needed in the story, and many other things that play a role within a book. 📕 When I teach Story First, it helps you find your path within your book and it helps lighten the load further down the process. Now, I want you to ask yourself this question and then write your response in the comments below! 👇 👉 What is your story asking from you right now? Answer that… and you’ll know your next step.
🛠️ Your Book Is Asking Something of You
Thanks to the lovely feedback I received from @Karen Dennis , I am now motivated to complete my first story about 'Audrey' - I spend at least two hours each day, but sometimes longer. It is finally I'm getting there and I am feeling much happier to work through it to the end. The chapters are clicking in nicely, with a few grammatic tweeaks too! Feeling relieved that I'm accomplishing what I'd set out for my 70th year!
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It’s a mixture of adrenaline rush drama and mystery. My heart is in contemporary romance. But this story hit me a little different. Don’t let the tagline fool you! Tagline: Beta Tested. Human Approved. Entirely Stolen. Title: SANITY Author: BY KAIDY WRIGHT Chapter One: The Architecture of a Void (1235) Whoa! Time to get up. The command came from a brain that didn’t recognize the body it was piloting. I rolled out of the heavy, silk-sheeted bed. My feet hitting hardwood that felt unnervingly... smooth. As I stood, a wave of vertigo washed over me. I scanned the room, my eyes darting from the high, crown-molded ceilings to the austere, ivory walls. "I’m awake, right?" I whispered. The sound of my own voice felt thin, like a radio signal losing its frequency. I pulled a plush robe over my shoulders—it was soft, expensive, and entirely... unfamiliar. Groggly... I moved and stumbled toward what I assumed was the en-suite. My mind was a sludgefest of half-formed thoughts. The kind of cognitive fog that usually clears after a splash of cold water. I reached for the handle and yanked it open. What? Only to find myself staring at a wall of empty hangers and built-in shelving. "Wait a minute," I muttered, the fog beginning to chill into a cold realization. "What?" I pinched the underside of my forearm. Hard. "Ouch! Okay... I’m awake." I let out a dry, nervous chuckle. "Foolish me. Get it together, girl. Just... a little morning disorientation. Talk it out." I turned to the second door and pulled. This one led to a long, vaulted hallway that seemed to stretch on with mathematical precision. I looked left, then right. The silence wasn't just... the absence of noise; it felt heavy, like the house was holding its breath. "Where am I?" I asked the empty air. "Why does this feel... Strange and wrong?" I took a few tentative steps onto the landing. My hand went to my forehead, checking for the heat of a fever, but my skin was cool. If anything, the cold was starting to seep into my marrow.
@Karen Dennis - definitely a 'Hello!' My genre is historical romance, a big Jane Austen, Georgette Heyer and Amanda Quick fan (to name a few) - I think I lived in that era as I have always had an affinity with that late Georgian/Regency era. But I do not watch Bridgerton! The series is what I call a 'bastardisation' of the era. Just my opinion! Anyhow, I'm just at the final stages of "She's no Ordinary, Audrey' - a Cinderella style with an older brother and twin sister's and a mother who suffered physical and mental trauma after giving birth to her youngest daughter, Audrey! Left with a 'wet nurse' until retrieved by her father after 4 years, her mother rejects her and her sister's end up treating her with contempt and more like a servant. Eventually, after her brother who becomes the head of the family and her only supporter, once her father died. There are many adventures for her, once she's introduced to a gentleman who is a friend of her brother, although there was jealousy, within her own family and her fiancé's (an unknown illegitimate step-brother), much intimacy, and eventually they marry. Lots of family secrets come to the forefront during Audrey's journey to happiness. ‘She’s No Ordinary Audrey’ - Chapter 1 Audrey peered out of the second floor drawing room window at the bustling street below. Even though the weather was inclement, and the late February snow still covered the pavements with foot prints that spoiled the perfection, and the tracks on the roadways where the carts and carriages had made their way through the busy street - it was still full of people going about their daily tasks. She sat alone, staring at the scene, no-one wanted to stay behind when there was shopping to be had. Being the youngest of the Manston family, and the plainest, her company was not wanted, yet again. They never wanted her to be with them - the twins, Rosemary and Angelica, that is. They had important purchases to be made as they were preparing for their first season, so we're being chaperoned by mama around fabric warehouses and dressmakers to be fitted out with the numerous evening dresses, ball gowns, walking dresses, day dresses and all the accoutrements that go with them. Yes, much shopping to be had.
@Karen Dennis - thank you for your kind words of encouragement. When you write in isolation you sometimes are too self-critical and lack confidence in what you do - this brings in procrastination and then go down a rabbit hole. I need to close this novel, as I've had it at a 'close to completed stage' for nearly 6 months - it just needs tidying up and then read by Beta-readers, etc., before moving to publishing (then that's a minefield of more procrastination!).
The Difference Between Self-Publishing & Traditional Publishing
Many writers tend to feel hesitant when it comes to figuring out HOW to publish their book. 📖 There are a few options. ✍️ You could self-publish, which is known as the quickest way. ✍️ There's hybrid publishing that involves for you to pay first. ✍️ Then there's traditional publishing where they help along the way. Which publishing route are you interested? I'm planning on having a special guest, @Rachael Bermingham talk about the difference between self-publishing and traditional publishing since she has been a publisher for 20+ years and her passion is helping others get their stories out there! 😁 I know that this would give a lot of value to many of you and help you understand what you get from each direction you can take along with what you need to do in order to get there. Now, does this seem something that you would be interested in? If so, what day and time of the week would work best? Let me know your timezone as well!
The Difference Between Self-Publishing & Traditional Publishing
@Dani Rosenblad James - definitely! You can never learn enough information, plus gaining from others experiences. Adds to your knowledge to make informed decisions for your own future route to be heard! 👍
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Shirley-Louise Daniels
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Novelist - I love history, so historical romance is my genre, Jane Austen my inspiration, plus 50 years a beauty & aesthetic spa therapist/educator.

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