The 5 Things Every Great Opening Has to Do
Edit: People, go find the openings, edit your threads and drop them in so we can all see them! Just wrapped the new members call. Talked through the 5 things I look for when I open a script. Every one of them has to show up in your first few pages. Usually not because you planned them on page 1, but because you did the real work everywhere else. The opening is one of the last things you write. You launch out to sea. You find your way back. Then you build the opening that earns it all. Here they are. 1. Voice Not showy. Not clever. Confident. The reader needs to feel, inside a paragraph, that you know what you're doing. That you didn't research this world, you lived in it. When you read Tim's script, the machinery is dense at first. Helicopters, gear, procedure. And then you settle in and think: oh, this guy is the real deal. That's voice. It's the subconscious trust you build with a reader who's looking for any excuse to stop reading. 2. A Great Character We Can't Look Away From Someone with a primal drive we recognize. Even if they're working against themselves. Woody is jealous. Marty Supreme is a con man. Rick in Casablanca is closed off and cynical. Shrek is a bachelor hiding in his man cave. The moment we meet them, something hooks us. Usually because the character is in conflict with themselves and doesn't even know it. External obstacles bore me. Internal contradiction is where the good stuff lives. 3. A Fresh Premise Usually a familiar genre with a surprising angle. Signs is every alien invasion movie ever made, but tiny. One house. One widower. A crisis of faith. Shrek 2 was pitched to us as Meet the Parents, only Fiona brings home Shrek. Take something that feels done. Give it a perspective nobody's seen. That's the job. 4. A World That Feels Lived In Specific details tell the reader a real person lives here. Page 1 of Signs. Graham walks into the hallway, picks up a balled-up pair of sweat socks and a kid's sweater from the floor, drops them in the hamper. He's a parent. That one beat does more than five pages of dialogue ever could.