Thanks @Gus Gray good points!

I absolutely love what @Paulo Costa, The Roaster He’ll have more insight but I think many come just to promote and then get the “roasts” for free” How are you using this community to your advantage @Dave Hughes ?

Hey @Chrissy Hogue Bartels I’m going to work down your questions but first I do like your video, I feel the intro might be slightly too long before you get into the main content, also towards the end you cut yourself off and you miss what you were saying, I feel like if this was intentional it’s a bit jarring as I watched all the way through, just to not get the end. 1. Is the hook clear enough for a broader audience? I think the hook works well for all audiences. 2. Does it feel too actor-specific? I think you mentioned voice over as an example which was fine but then later on you go into actors and performers specifically which then may loose the attention of others not in that industry. It’s also in the video as an asset, so It might just be quicker to re record the whole thing. 3. Does it connect to business-building and visibility? I liked how you went into your business before revealing the last point, if people are watching that far, that plug works well there and you made it easily a apart of the video but then it cut off the ending. 4. Would a network marketer or online business builder see why this matters? The whole video may be a bit long, if it’s just to promote your courses and content. 5. What would make it stronger as a bridge into The Prosperity Ascent Lab? Is that another brand or business? I thought the brand is UGC? Maybe making it more clear Overall I think you’re good on camera, the jump cuts can be a bit jarring but that might just be me, if you can have some other footage over those while you talk it might make it a bit more interesting. I also agree with @Lion Fludd maybe having somethings pop up on screen could really help grab and keep their attention for longer. I’m always happy to talk and connect. I’d love to see how we can help each other so would love for you to send me a DM and we can potentially work together! I also have my community about Marketing, I’d love to have you there!

Thanks for tagging as always @Paulo Costa, The Roaster @Kim M. @Lau Brizuela @Aimee Jardon I’d also love to connect with other marketers I already know @Chris K. Davidson well, so more than happpy to chat and see if we can help each other, learn and grow together! You’re more than welcome to check out my community The Marketing Common Room

Hey @Coleen Huebert I think it's very honourable helping people in this space, I know it affects many and that's worldwide, Here is the UK people suffer with it a lot in rented home and accommodation. I think you have some good formatting with you about page, I am slightly concerned on how much you talk about pricing in the sense that $1200 for a course but you're giving that away for free? My question as a user would be "Where did she get that reference from?" It kind of seems like it's been plucked out of thin air. similar to the other prices, so may don't focus on the courses side and price, where you can really dig deep into the fact that you've experienced it and know how it feels, really go for the feeling and empathy side of things. You've done really well with your video, it might be a bit too long, potentially create another shorter video summarising what the community is and then have the current video as a 2nd video within your assets. (Also try to film with a window in front of you and not behind you, @Mona Weathers can help you with that as she's a pro! I think you should also talk in the first person, this is a personal community that you've ACTUALLY been though, instead of "She" mention "I have been through this" "I'm a survivor" "I struggled with this and found out..." etc. Hope that makes sense and isn't too harsh lol I'm always happy to chat and have my own marketing community where you can learn from me, other marketeers, business and community owners all learning and growing together! The Marketing Common Room

I think it's interesting to hear about what you do @Kingsley Mirieri A couple of points from me. 1. I think it's a really personal group and for you I think having real photos might help more, the slide you've made look like they are made from AI (Which is okay to use) I feel having less stock imagery and more real people in real situations could really help get more people through the door. Even if it's pictures of you and your friends and family. 2. I think you should reformat slightly, think about what benefits you're providing, people want to know what they get from you and then the story afterwards. Start with "Is your life showing consistent victory, or are you just surviving?" This is a good hook and really grabs your attention, then you can go back into why they should join. Hope this helps mate and I'm always happy to chat and you're more than welcome to join my community about marketing where you can learn, get feedback and we can all grow together! The Marketing Common Room

Thanks @Paulo Costa, The Roaster @Sumit Sharma I really like your story and it really does bring that natural relationship building and connection. I think all that needs to happen is some potential reordering. It's great to learn about you and how far you've come and what a cools story, but sadly I think people might just scroll past that to get to the "What is in it for me" section, try to start off with a what your offer is and how you help people. Then you can maybe cut back to why and how you've had this great experience and become a solo entrepreneur etc. Hope that helps and I'd love to have you in my community and I know your expertise would be invaluable, It's called The Marketing Common Room it's all about learning marketing and helping each other and growing together!

@Sumit Sharma