The Worth and Work of Life... Book feedback/thoughts/input

Hi Everyone, I met Reko at a retreat and he suggested it might be valuable to connect with a few of you in this writing club. Thank you Reko for the suggestion and the opportunity.

I have just completed a draft of my second book called The Worth and Work of Life. I am passing it around to a few friends and trusted colleagues before I work with my editor and do some deep editing.

Since I don't know any of you there is no pressure to look at it. However if you are wired this way, and would like to contribute, I would love to have some feedback.

I want to help the reader see afresh the Worth of Life and to rediscover the common Work of Life. When understood, accepted, and partnered with, this leads to maturity, wholeness, and a beauty as your unique DNA will be realized and released.

This will also help you, and us as a society, rise above the poor worldviews and the incomplete and false narratives we have floating around us.

For feedback here are a couple of question I have been pondering. I do not want to be ideological offensive and yet I have attempted to tackle some of the hard things our society is wrestling with. So questions:

Is there some topics, stories, or specific language, I need to reclarify, remove, or rewrite?

Does it read well and flow well or do i need to ....... (thoughts)?

Any others comments you think might be valuable for me?

Thank you everyone. Again no pressure. Just putting this out there.

And finally thank you again Reko. Hope to see you in person here soon.

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