Revised sales letter following my arse-kicking!

Dear

oh marketing-yoda!

Here it is, all the lessons I've learned and many I've forgotten. A sales letter to accompany the coconut with a QR code to this web page: https://www.somersetwm.co.uk/coconuts

Thoughts gratefully received!

P.S. I can't mention pensions, finances, or money in the letter 'cos then I'll have to include all the FCA bollocks, so it's deliberately light to get them into the web domain to book a call.

P.P.S. QR code is traceable to each person, so I can follow up via LinkedIn or other lumpy mail idc.

P.P.P.S. Sales letter pdf render is a screenshot - the actual letter looks far more professionally handwritten

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