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I would really like some help

Hey guys, need a quick favor —I’ve just finished editing a short VSL (video sales letter) that I’m planning to use for my outreach to car dealerships. It’s meant to explain my offer and help build trust so they book a call with me.

I’m a bit unsure about it though…I feel like it might not come across as super trustworthy — maybe it looks a bit too “young” or like a beginner made it.

Would really appreciate it if you could:

Let me know if you think the video is solid and gets the message across.
And if not — what specifically could be better? (Trust, clarity, design, tone, anything)

Here’s the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YyscvZx4g6oChZwJfoKLuweUUoA2_4uN/view?usp=sharing

Thanks in advance 🙏 it means a lot — I really want to make this as clean and credible as possible before I start sending it to businesses.

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