A while ago, I was helping a canal cruise business here in Amsterdam. They had great photos, solid reviews, and a decent website. But⌠nothing was working.
I kept tweaking the ads, rewriting the copy, changing the targeting â and still, the bookings werenât anything to write home about.
Then I shifted focus to something most people overlook:đ The offer itself.
Because one of the most valuable things you can change without spending more, is the offer.
âIf the offer isnât irresistible, the marketing doesnât matter.â
And that was exactly the problem. The offer was fine. But fine doesnât sell.
So here are some of the changes we made:
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Added a limited-time hook (âOnly 8 spots per dayâ)
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Introduced an optional upgrade that boosted both bookings and profit
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1 Free drink onboard
đŻ Same photos. Same ad spend. More bookings.
đ Lesson: Donât start by asking how to get more traffic. Start by asking: âWould I buy this offer if I saw it for the first time?â
If not, letâs fix that.
Drop your tour offer below, Iâll give you direct feedback on how to sharpen it.